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    My Deadly Sins...

    Ever since I can remember
    When I started this journey of life
    As a beginner
    I was already an expert as a sinner
    Only problem with this
    You don't get rewarded nor crowned as a winner

    Been messing up my outer soul & my inner
    I can't fake break
    So no need to be a pretender

    Ever since I lost that thing called innocence
    I got in trouble more than a little bit
    Got heavy with my actions
    Saying to hell with the consequence

    If God is my witness
    The co-signer
    Of all this evidence

    I always had a problem with that word called lust
    Desires so strong
    It overwhelmed me a little more than too much
    Where you couldn't have what you want

    All you can do is look
    But never touch
    Out of your grasp

    Which can drive you insanely mad
    Wishing it was yours
    Wishing it is what you had
    Your thoughts is just take it

    Getting myself ready to grab
    Then my conscience come into play
    And I pull myself together & get my composure back
    I leave it right there where it's at

    I desist just like that
    You can say
    I got back on track

    Now that my heart is filled with that color called black
    Can this be a.k.a. hate
    If like I didn't have enough to swallow
    I got this on my plate

    I don't like this feeling
    I just want it to go away
    Cause this is an evil look I have on my face

    So what do I have to do
    To try & replace
    Get a better understanding on the situation
    And turn to dislike instead of hate

    I might not like the problem
    But I understand the case
    See I have plenty pride

    To admit that I'm wrong is hard for goodness sake
    To swallow that & set aside
    Is some what a gluttony
    That's way too high

    I was too lazy to even try
    Then my life did a turn around
    And your love came into my life

    It aided me
    And helped me get on by
    When I see you fighting the demons w/in yourself in total darkness
    I want to be your light

    When you ask
    How come I care so much
    That's the reason why

    "Truth is real and real is truth; that's no lie"

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    Re: My Deadly Sins...

    Wow, at furst I was intimedated by the length of this. But I flowed well and held my interest. You're either an experienced writer, or a natrual.
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    Re: My Deadly Sins...

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Wow, at furst I was intimedated by the length of this. But I flowed well and held my interest. You're either an experienced writer, or a natrual.
    Thanks a mill'... I know it was kind of long... To be honest I had to cut it short cause I know if I put the whole version in ppl would of felt the same way... (If they already don't)... All my poems get kind of lenghty... I guess when I write I don't know when to stop... I feel the need to pour my emotions on paper... Thanks for the comment!!! But you give me too much credit I just like to write... But I'll accept the compliment...

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