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Reply With QuoteHey Kuwi great poem.^_^ Who doesn't have issues with their mother? This poem actually reminded me of the movie Mommy Dearest. Great job!
Why am I always suffering?
Why do I feel as tight as a ring?
It's because of you.
Everything that you do.
It's because of you that I always bleed
Until I give you what you need.
I'm ready to cry today
Because you give me a bruise everyday.
You yell at me with anger
As you hit me with a hanger.
You made me stay in the darkness every night
Cause you never show me the light.
I hate you dear mother.
I always hate you like another.
Last edited by KuwiRules145; Dec 02, 2007 at 03:10 AM.
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Hey Kuwi great poem.^_^ Who doesn't have issues with their mother? This poem actually reminded me of the movie Mommy Dearest. Great job!
@.@ my my... i never thought that you'd.. oh well i thought this poem was suppose to apreciate moms or somthing... xD i guess im wrong... the title blinded me n the poem caught me by suprise... xD good work...
hmm... i also have issues on my mom... but i think it's wats best for me...
~.~ i think... sigh..
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A beautiful poem, You've done a good work Kuwi!!! It told everything I feel sometimes till the part about hating, for I always try to do my best and sometimes my mum doesn't apriciate it but I don't love her less for that, though it sometimes really hurts me... I know she's not thinking about harming me...
I really enjoyed reading this, thank You Kuwi!
I thank you all very much. I thought I sounded too emo but I thank you all very much.
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
well i can kinda relat to that but me and my mom just dont get along and she kicked me out of her house over some shit but i like it its good it hasnt happened to you huh?? i hope not my dad use to get kinda like that after he got so drunk but now he doesnt dirnk that much cuz he found a gf good for him but i loved it it means somethin to me alot!!!
Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday
ok ...wait mintues ..ummmmm
what happend the title say (To my dear mother) but i see the oppsite ...
buuut ..i love it ..
keep up ....
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A really good poem you have there Kuwi, but i really hope all of that does'nt happen to you, or ever will.... Otherwise it's a good poem, keep it up
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