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    To my dear mother.

    Why am I always suffering?
    Why do I feel as tight as a ring?
    It's because of you.
    Everything that you do.
    It's because of you that I always bleed
    Until I give you what you need.
    I'm ready to cry today
    Because you give me a bruise everyday.
    You yell at me with anger
    As you hit me with a hanger.
    You made me stay in the darkness every night
    Cause you never show me the light.
    I hate you dear mother.
    I always hate you like another.
    Last edited by KuwiRules145; Dec 02, 2007 at 04:10 AM.
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    Re: To my dear mother.

    Hey Kuwi great poem.^_^ Who doesn't have issues with their mother? This poem actually reminded me of the movie Mommy Dearest. Great job!

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    Re: To my dear mother.

    @.@ my my... i never thought that you'd.. oh well i thought this poem was suppose to apreciate moms or somthing... xD i guess im wrong... the title blinded me n the poem caught me by suprise... xD good work...

    hmm... i also have issues on my mom... but i think it's wats best for me...
    ~.~ i think... sigh..

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    Re: To my dear mother.

    A beautiful poem, You've done a good work Kuwi!!! It told everything I feel sometimes till the part about hating, for I always try to do my best and sometimes my mum doesn't apriciate it but I don't love her less for that, though it sometimes really hurts me... I know she's not thinking about harming me...
    I really enjoyed reading this, thank You Kuwi!

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    I thank you all very much. I thought I sounded too emo but I thank you all very much.
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    Re: To my dear mother.

    well i can kinda relat to that but me and my mom just dont get along and she kicked me out of her house over some shit but i like it its good it hasnt happened to you huh?? i hope not my dad use to get kinda like that after he got so drunk but now he doesnt dirnk that much cuz he found a gf good for him but i loved it it means somethin to me alot!!!
    Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday

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    ok ...wait mintues ..ummmmm
    what happend the title say (To my dear mother) but i see the oppsite ...
    buuut ..i love it ..
    keep up ....

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    Re: To my dear mother.

    A really good poem you have there Kuwi, but i really hope all of that does'nt happen to you, or ever will.... Otherwise it's a good poem, keep it up

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