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    My dear, My love

    My dear, My love
    oh how i see
    the only true meaning
    you have for me


    My dear , My love
    How could i forget?
    the only love you have for me
    is not a regret.


    My dear, My love
    my meaning is true
    to organize my feelings
    and show the truth.


    My dear, My love
    don't make me forget
    the sweet sensation
    you have on your lips.


    My dear ,My love
    these words are quite true.
    Becuase the only love i have
    is only for you.


    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: My dear, My love

    sO CUTE. sO MUSHY. So adorable.
    Great stanzas.
    Great flow of words
    I totally envy you for writing way better than i can.
    You are like SO awesome.
    LOL.

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    ^^ I love the way it gives a warm feeling ^-^
    Very cute and adorable agreed, love to read more from you princess ^_^

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    Re: My dear, My love

    you did great job with this piece
    i love the setup alantin the colors it make stand out .

    every well writen i can feel the word very well
    hope to read more from you

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    Re: My dear, My love

    princesslady-why im surprised you liked it. Thanks i guess LOL so yeah thanx

    chrystalann2004-thank you very much for the comment also^-^.

    ihauntforlust-why thank you too.A warm feeling eh? i need to write more.lol

    mveli2-thank you too i guess.
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: My dear, My love

    It was a very romantic poem Iluvmyloser The stanza where great in description as they told of a story of one staying true to their love and wishing them to never let them go. It really was a good poem

    Although the rhyming in the third stanza was broken a little it didn't lose the meaning of the poem in general. I hope to see more of your work
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    Re: My dear, My love

    OMG!!! a mod actually liked my poems ..hehe thank you im flattered lol

    thank you very much sazzy for the comment^-^ oh and the hint^^
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: My dear, My love

    i did actually. I know surprising. I keep my personal feelings for people away from the critiq of their work. Actually...i am starting to mrespect you. I respect beyotches. Keep it up chick.
    anyway...great poem.

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