My dear sun

My dear sun

Glowing brilliantly,
my sun.
Emitting sweet honey yellow ray.
The morning glow.

The one which pushes all the darkness away.
Warms me up from the cold night.
My source of energy.
Why must the clouds be jealous at us?

I want to see you glare and shine.
Like you always have.
Why must you frown?
It made the whole world gloom.

Cold and freezing.
It always is once you are away.
I hated it.
Why must you go?

I would follow you if I could,
but you were too fast for me.
Excuses huh?
I sighed…

It’s ok I guess.
I know someday I will be next to you.
I’ll just to be patient for now.
Until that day comes…

^^ another... :)

oh ray... why must you make people feel so guilty??? your poems make people feel things, most likely what you were feeling when you wrote it and that is a great quality... don't ever loose that...

Another lovely one... this one has really made me speechless... it's very beautifull, nicely written... a great love poem... adore it...

Your love poems are very nice too, still my favs are the old ones... ahh... maybe it's while I'm not in love...

@.@ im sorry for making u feel guilty @.@ yes..i promise i wont lose that~!

dark poems..somehow i can't make any good ones these days @.@ but hmm..
i'll try though... hmm...

very cool poem i like this one alot
and love does seem to make you warm
and fuzzy , its always good to have somone
there for you to make those cold days warmer
and the dark days brighter .

Yes ^^ they do.. :) thank you for the nice comment friend ^^

Wow you make such romantic poems Ray!!! Sometimes I wonder who it is you're writing about!!^^

Hmm... who? @.@ :p secret.... :laughs: ^^ thank you for the comment~!