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Apr 07, 2007, 01:21 PM
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 Ao's official cat girl~★  Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland)
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 Credits: 14,353 | To my dearest To my dearest I just want you with me To hold, care, love You know I love you I would do everything and anything Just so see your amazing smile When I’m with you its like no one else is here Pain, insurceates gone Pelsure, happyness appear The touch of your skin agent me Your lips agent mine It leaves me breathless The feeling I get when I with you The love I feel for you will never change This love forever pure As what it was from the begging and forever always
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Apr 07, 2007, 02:21 PM
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 ~The Master~  Join Date: May 2005 Location: Massachusetts
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Credits: 17,606 | Re: To my dearest Really nice poem equinn great job on it hope to see more from u.  I liked it alot.
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Apr 08, 2007, 07:04 AM
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| Ao's official cat girl~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland)
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Credits: 14,353 | Re: To my dearest lol thanks for the comments ^__^ yes top of my list get better at spelling lol thanks
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Apr 09, 2007, 06:11 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Within the arms of the one I love.
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Credits: 1,595 | Re: To my dearest Yes... aww so happy and yet is sad.. Its a good poem and keep up the good work!
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Apr 09, 2007, 07:07 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough  | Re: To my dearest nice i love it ..  I just want you to know everything I say is true I know how much you love me as much as I love you You’re always there for me but life without you, is impossible to see I just wanna say I’m sorry.... for ever making you cry and I’m sorry.... for any time I ever lied your love for me, is shown by my ring and that proves to me I can tell you any thing I just want you to know, that I will always love you and I hope I’ll be with you 4-ever but whatever you do, I want you to know I will never leave you for some other for every minute I walk away from you I’m already missing you and I hope you'll be missing me too you're more to me then just a friend and I’ll never stop loving you until the very end.
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Apr 09, 2007, 09:53 AM
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| Ao's official cat girl~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland)
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Credits: 14,353 | Re: To my dearest lol thanks but xxoxx u see that kinda poem u did u should of really put it in another thread .......
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Apr 09, 2007, 10:25 AM
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| 1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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Credits: 58,536 | Re: To my dearest hmm.. not my kind of poem.. but i like it.. i envy... :x oops... ^^ hope to see more in the future... |
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Apr 10, 2007, 09:48 AM
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| Hell Enforcer  Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: South dakota, Native American
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Credits: 14,878 | Re: To my dearest Is this to dedicated to someone? because it sounds like it lol, anyway good to see you writing more poems like this and hope you get better at it, and I truly love your work EQ, keep it up. |
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Apr 10, 2007, 10:16 AM
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| Lost In My Own World  Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida
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Credits: 5,019 | Re: To my dearest Yes it was very nice and very sweet. I think that the spelling could of been better but it was readable. Keep up the good work.
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