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    To my dearest love

    To my dearest love,
    I have my strength now to show
    You my shards of love

    I will not lose it,
    I have my faith in my heart now
    To loose my feelings

    It is now the time to,
    Let you feel my blazing shine
    There...I come for you

    Your shined glory,
    In the shrouds of my heart and
    Letting my self to end

    To end all,
    My hiding fears and to pass
    My confiding wall

    I let it,
    Loose in the midst of
    All my sanity

    And to break,
    My cursing self delving in
    My detest fears and sighs
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    I was attempting to do an haiku but i ended up to pull this one.
    Hope all of you will like it.
    To my dearest love,
    I have my strength now to show
    You my shards of love

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    Re: To my dearest love

    very good. I like it.....................................

    A Soul Needs a Purpose to Live.- Gaara

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    Re: To my dearest love

    Thank you very much superstar9156!.I was in my clouds of thinking and then I came up with the first stanza but my mind figured out that it isn't finished when I read it.So I dig a little of my mind then it came out like this.Again, thank you very much for your kind words.
    To my dearest love,
    I have my strength now to show
    You my shards of love

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    Re: To my dearest love

    your welcome. i've been recently into poems now so i am always reading and checking peoples poems out. I enjoy it a lot.

    A Soul Needs a Purpose to Live.- Gaara

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    i've been recently into poems now so i am always reading and checking peoples poems out. I enjoy it a lot.
    I've been recently into poems too!.Well, I always learn more here in AO.There are many inspiring here.I enjoy reading poems here.Again, thank you very much.
    To my dearest love,
    I have my strength now to show
    You my shards of love

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    Re: To my dearest love

    the poem tells of love, insanity, life, and fear. it is a good combination. it is pieced together quite well.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: To my dearest love

    You got my point Dragons2801.I'm clearly describing of my feelings to someone who I fell in love.However I don't have the courage to tell her my feelings.
    To my dearest love,
    I have my strength now to show
    You my shards of love

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    Re: To my dearest love

    you need to not be scared, dont be all up in her grill and say i love you or anything, ease up to her get to know her, then you will find if you truly love her.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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