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    my diary

    i don't know if this is a poem or a story , i just wrote it as person writing in his diary
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    my diary


    my name ,, well my name isn't important , i'm 14 years old now ,,
    i was looking for something to burst my feelings , anger and story at
    so i thought this diary thing might be good to blow everythought in my mind at


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    me, i'm alone ,, i lost everything ,, my life, my dreams and my hope
    i am going down like ther comet above to the ground , i don't see no
    more i don't feel no more and i don't care no more

    talk to me , some one , talk to me , why won't anyone listen
    why won't anyone reply to my need

    i can't seem to remember the cause of this , i just.... i...just can't
    why.... whyyy... why won't i ....

    crying and crying .. i can't seem to find a smile ... i can't seem
    to feel my joy or happyness

    i geuss this is who i am , i geuss this who i will be ... i geuss
    this is who i always will be

    i could never be accepted ... i could never be needed ..
    i'm just left aside to feel the only i feel
    lonely........

    i could never turn around to change things
    to set things right , the past is done and can not be undone

    my life is .....
    my life is.....
    a mystery to even my self
    i can't seem to see my true own self again

    this book is the only thing that listen to my words
    my thoughts
    and my life

    no one there for me , no one know cares about me
    and i care for no one, neither do i want to

    i hate them all . all those people who hurt me
    i despise the very looks , voices and personalities of them

    thats how i feel
    thats my pain
    and this is my diary .....

    my diary
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    Re: my diary

    Wow......I like it............I..I
    *looks down* It feels like I can relate to it....it makes me think of.....me
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    Re: my diary

    At first, I think it's a story... But when I read the middle and the last parts...
    I've seen that it's a poem... Nice piece of yours, Power...

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    Re: my diary

    Ah, Another testament to pain!!!Joyous!!!!WELL, You really think you fxcked up, Huh?How.....You find yourself in juvie?THIS over a girl? Say your piece, bud.......Been hearing many a Lamentation this mornin'......
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: my diary

    really good i hope this works out. i mean you sayed it is to get rid of you feelings... so good luck and i liked it wat ever it is ya know
    Moving on Is the hardest Part

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    Re: my diary

    very nice work eitherway cant wait
    to see what you write about next
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: my diary

    I thought it was a story too^^ nice....
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: my diary

    Wow... that takes me back to when..... well no matter. This was awesome. Such pain. I could feel the agony ripping my heart out as I continued down to the bottom of the page! Pure awesomeness!

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