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    My Every thing

    Every smile is for you.
    Every thought is of you.
    Every wish is to be with you.
    Every touch is just for you.
    Every heart beat beating for you.
    Every deed is for you.
    Every minute spent longing for you.
    Every dream is of you.
    Every thing I do is for you.

    You are whom I long for.
    You are a part of me
    You are what I wished for.
    You are all I want.
    You are what I am waiting for.
    You are why I am here.
    You are what I live for.
    You are everything to me.

    Without you I would be lost,
    Wondering those empty dark streets.
    Then out of the corner of my eye,
    I saw you standing there.
    Now I long to be standing right next to you,
    No matter where you go.
    I will always be there,
    Loving you no matter what.
    For you are my everything.

    i wrote this last night..Enjoy
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    Re: My Every thing

    Yes! A nice repitive poem that isnt too bad. Good job, I really liked the flow.
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    Re: My Every thing

    I like the repetition in this poem, unlike my poem thank you it doesn't get boring and it keeps me wanting to read more! Excellent job on this poem dancy_SAZ!

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    Re: My Every thing

    Wow Sazzy I really like this poem. Anyone who is in love can relate to this poem. Keep up your good work Sazzy.

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