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    Re: My Final Poem for Today

    Quote Originally Posted by Keiko
    !~WOW~!

    I really like this poem you wrote. ^^ First one I read here at Anime Online. I didn't know they had a poem section here. ^^

    The lines that I liked most were these:



    They flow so nicely. ^^ You are a very good poet. ^^ You took part in a workshop? That must have been fun and exciting. ^^ Good luck to you. And please post your other poems if you have the chance. ^^
    Oh, I'm so sorry, Keiko! I falied to notice your post >.< I'm really sorry!! If Kedar-san had not posted, I would not have found out. I'm really sorry, Keiko... (darn e-mail notification! Why did they not notify me of your post! -_-" )

    Thank you very much for your commments, Keiko! Like what Kedar-san said, they are deeply appreciated, believe me! I'm so honored - my poem was the first one you have read here at AO! Really, thank you!

    Yes, the workshop was fun, especially because the people there were really funny and have a great sense of humor. So yeah, I had a blast with them, and they're all nice as well!

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    Re: My Final Poem for Today

    Or you can try to use this exercise to help.

    List words most often used by you in your poetry. Than look them up and list all other possible alternatives. Try to use in other daily writings your alternatives. Use all of them. And then it will be more natural in your poetry!

    Does that sound good?

    KEDAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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    Re: My Final Poem for Today

    Wow, that's a great idea, Nympho! Yes, I will definitely try that. Thank you!

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