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    Red face My first poem

    .::You Care::.
    When you left,I thought the world was over.
    No smiles from me,not even a grin.
    When you opened that door and left,I cried forever.
    I walk down a Meadow,cherry blossom petals fall down on me.
    I continue to walk,then I break down in tears.
    Why,must I live with this,why did you go?
    My heart broke into a million pieces,then I felt a hand on my shoulder.
    It was you...you helped me up from being sad forever.
    And we held hands,walking into the sunset,knowing that you care...
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    Yay,my first sig from meh,Kitten chan :3

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    Re: My first poem

    Hey, if you like making great poems like the one you just made...maybe you should join the poetic clan...they like poems and art and stuff... very beutiful poem...Keep writing from that heart of yours.
    If you strive for one thing in life for so long...It's a given you'll miss others along the way...that's how it is...That's life

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    Re: My first poem

    Hey, if you like making great poems like the one you just made...maybe you should join the poetic clan...they like poems and art and stuff... very beutiful poem...Keep writing from that heart of yours.
    hes right very good poem and u should join that clan if ur that good


    thank u SasuraiHell
    go -=NOOBZ=- clan!

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    Re: My first poem

    Si
    thats a long line and good poem u defenetly should join



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: My first poem

    Good poem lil sis!!! *hugs* You should join the poem/fanfic clan
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    Re: My first poem

    very interesting poem =) good job =)

    SPECIAL THANKS TO: N!tr0-Glyc3r1n, TaurausDemon23, and Surio; for helping me put up my sig =)

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