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Reply With QuoteWow! trully amazing poem there..
i like it, perfect!
the picture fits in too!
I have nothing to say
except i envy you for being a poetic person..
keep it up!
Why do you stand by my grave and cry?
You weep and say you don't know why.
Had you asked while I was here,
You all could have saved your tears.
During mass you spoke of me,
And how it's such a tragedy,
All in shock,with sobbing cries,
Now you speak of me with lies.
"How happy he was,lived life to the full",
I never went out so stop with the bull.
"Always smiling and joking,full of life",
Miserable,moody and full of STRIFE...
"So many friends and loved by all",
Where were you all, when I started to fall?
So many people I don't even know,
Some of you people have the cheek to show?
Why are the people that hurt me here?
Some of you I haven't seen for years,
Where were you all, when I needed you most?
Is it easier to care now I'm only a ghost?
Last edited by flaminghate; Jan 27, 2008 at 11:32 PM.
Wow! trully amazing poem there..
i like it, perfect!
the picture fits in too!
I have nothing to say
except i envy you for being a poetic person..
keep it up!
If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
I don't mind and you don't matter
Nice poem. Its filled with darkness and hate. It goes nicely with the picture too. Great job!
Aw yea. I totally am in love with this poem. Especially the part where you quoted what they said at the funeral and continued with the real truth, that was creative ^^ Your rhyming was good too. Good job.
This poem is great!!! Full of feelings and anger and sadness.... Wonderful... I read it holding my breath...
I don't know what else to say I liked it, because it told things the way there are...It's always like that... Some just don't understand what they have untill it's gone and some just play that they care at funerals...
A great work flaminghate!!!
oh...my...god!so,true...a sad truth to face, but in the last two months, I"ve been...alone...
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