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    My gift

    My gift

    Since I was little
    I often steal glances at you
    No matter where you are or what you're doing
    Your tired and lonely gaze never seem to go away

    Remembering when you used to hold me tight
    Till the sun comes up
    You'll wipe away those tears
    And pretend nothing ever happened

    You lock yourself in your room
    Crying silently
    In the darkness I still see you pain

    So every night before I sleep
    I would whisper a silent prayer
    Hoping the demons that disturbed you would leave

    Naive I was as a six year old
    I believed everything that was told
    Mummy wasn't crying
    She was just overjoyed

    Time flew
    And I had other things to do
    Unintentionally it was
    I forgot all about you

    On this very special day
    I want to give you a little present
    A little gift to show that I still care
    It may not cost a lot
    Or even worth a penny

    You found it beside you
    And for the first time in years
    I saw you smiling
    My gift was the greatest of all
    Me.

    dedicated to all the mums in the world for mother's day ^^ may u all luv ur mums!

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    Re: My gift

    lol mummy

    besides a few typos GREAT poem. the flow goes together good and i feel emotion in the peom so a 9/10
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    Re: My gift

    wow you should give that to ur mom she'd really love it I know I do


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    Re: My gift

    GREAT POEM ELIE... this is great, ur poems always come from ur heart thats what makes them so good. great poem elie this is really great...
    i can't wait to see what else u have up ur sleaves. great poem elie, just great (i can't say this enough).

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    Re: My gift

    Awww! I was hoping someone would tribute a poem to all moms of the world. I remember I used to write short little poems to my Mother, and I still do write them every once in a while, not just for the Mother's day, to her happy. Such small things bring so much joy to the hearts of all people. Anyway! Your poem is simply beautiful, Elie. I like it so much. Keep it up!!!

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    That was really cute... Nice job on it. ^^

    THEY can have the WORLD, we'll CREATE our OWN.

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    Re: My gift

    makes me think of my mother

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    Re: My gift

    Aww that's so sweet Elie! I love it ^_^ Great Mother's Day poem

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