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    My Hand...

    Take my hand my friend
    I wish to help you along
    Just knowing there are two of us
    Can help to make you strong
    I know life seems unfair
    and sometimes gets you down
    But know that I am here for you
    I'll always be around
    So set a day aside
    and together we will walk
    down all your troubled pathways
    for it sometimes helps to talk
    If you should need some time
    To do this on your own
    Then I will be here waiting
    Since you wish to be alone.
    I guess I want to say
    that I hold your friendship dear
    and if you ever need me
    just reach out, because I am here

    Foolish beating

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    Re: My Hand...

    Oh my goodness!!! This is so beautifull!!!! It almost made me cry... wonderful and sweet... one of your best works so far... truly magnificent... So sweet, full of love and caring!!!! ^^ it's good to have a friend like you!!!!!

    And all the things you promise here... so hard to fulfill sometimes but so lovely... ahh.. made me dreamy!!! Won-der-ful!!! I just can't stop saying that!!!!! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    I glad that you love It and when you say that *all the things you promise here... so hard to fulfill sometimes * yes ...^^
    Thank you for your sweet comment...*sigh*

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    Re: My Hand...

    I'm gonna lower the tone now.

    My little boy Billy
    had a ten foot willy
    and he sold it to the woman next door.

    She thought it was a snake
    so she hit it with a rake
    and now its only 3 foot four

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    I loved that poem...it was beautiful and so true..I can't wait to hear some more!! Good Job and keep up the good work!!

    Made by mi amigo Mveli2

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    Re: My Hand...

    Oh! this was so sweet and pure! Very pure, like the expensive orange juice!..lol
    there is such a beautiful aspect of innocence, and patience, even kindness. And without all the issues, and dramas that are so commonly found in today's society. Patience, kindness, and that purity are what love is truely made of.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    oO well thanks a lot ...Iam glad that you love it ...^^
    and you too Peach Thanks a lot for the sweet words you put ..^^

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    Re: My Hand...

    Haha! More people need to feel this way about their friends. A lot of the problem with this world is the uncomunity mindedness that's floating around here. And it's beautiful to see a REAL friend still out there. Your are lucky to call you friend! I loved it. It flowed perfectly and the feeling was amazing. It made me smile. And that's only the second time I've done that today. Be proud! Your a fantastic writer.

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