My Hate

LostbutFound · Oct 30, 2006, 09:44 AM

my hates so real
its in my body
surging thru
killing me softly

my hates as real
as enyones passion
running over me
like an assasion

My hates so true
as true as me and you
pulsing trew me like orange
juice

it kills me that
i feel this way
each and every minute
day by F*****g day
MY HATE

*Kasai* · Nov 01, 2006, 01:57 AM

Capitalization! Well,more elaboration could presume.

Pride_Edward · Nov 01, 2006, 04:10 AM

This poem was really filled with hatred,I can feel it but Kasai is right,capitalization must be put...

LostbutFound · Nov 01, 2006, 05:47 AM

i guess it must.............................................. ...............

nightboyz · Nov 01, 2006, 10:12 AM

You put alot of power in to it. I would like to see where this hate is coming from.

LostbutFound · Nov 01, 2006, 10:41 AM

life in general life its self.............................................. .................

Oct 30, 2006, 09:44 AM	#1 (permalink)
LostbutFound Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Behind you ...........boo Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 814	My Hate my hates so real its in my body surging thru killing me softly my hates as real as enyones passion running over me like an assasion My hates so true as true as me and you pulsing trew me like orange juice it kills me that i feel this way each and every minute day by F***g day MY HATE __________________ Ok in order to judge other you first have to be able to judge yourself, then we must all except each others as equals**
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Nov 01, 2006, 01:57 AM	#2 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,490	Re: My Hate Capitalization! Well,more elaboration could presume. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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Pride_Edward Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 247 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: My Hate This poem was really filled with hatred,I can feel it but Kasai is right,capitalization must be put... __________________ Our own site: http://www.fma-adikz.tk
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LostbutFound Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Behind you ...........boo Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 814	Re: My Hate i guess it must.............................................. ............... __________________ Ok in order to judge other you first have to be able to judge yourself, then we must all except each others as equals
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nightboyz Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Where sence means nothing... Posts: 225 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 873	Re: My Hate You put alot of power in to it. I would like to see where this hate is coming from. __________________ I Think... Therefore You Are...
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Nov 01, 2006, 10:41 AM	#6 (permalink)
LostbutFound Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Behind you ...........boo Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 814	Re: My Hate life in general life its self.............................................. ................. __________________ Ok in order to judge other you first have to be able to judge yourself, then we must all except each others as equals
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