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    My Hate

    my hates so real
    its in my body
    surging thru
    killing me softly

    my hates as real
    as enyones passion
    running over me
    like an assasion

    My hates so true
    as true as me and you
    pulsing trew me like orange
    juice

    it kills me that
    i feel this way
    each and every minute
    day by F*****g day
    MY HATE
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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    Re: My Hate

    Capitalization! Well,more elaboration could presume.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: My Hate

    This poem was really filled with hatred,I can feel it but Kasai is right,capitalization must be put...

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    Re: My Hate

    i guess it must.............................................. ...............
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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    Re: My Hate

    You put alot of power in to it. I would like to see where this hate is coming from.
    Kamen Rider....DECADE!!!

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    life in general life its self.............................................. .................
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