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Reply With QuoteKiani Haki22 (Jun 16, 2008)
These three poems I made for my gorlfriend when we were dateing. Sadly we are no longer together as of today so I am very sad and hurt right now. This is just something I just thought I would share to every one here.
1st Love poem
HELP ME SET MY HEART FREE, FROM THIS PAIN AND LONELINESS THAT DWELLS WITH IN ME, LOVE IS THE CURE THAT I SEEK, TO DRIVE AWAY THE SUFFERING IN MY SOUL SO DEEP, WITH MY HEART WITH YOURS BEATING AS ONE, FOR EVER ETERNAL AS THE WARM HEAVENLY SUN!!
2nd Love poem
"When you’re born, so is your soul mate, and the longer you are separated from them the greater the pain is as the knife of loneliness stabs deeper into your heart."
3rd Love poem
I hold you, I kiss you, I whisper sweet words in your ears and speak only truth.
When we walk together hand in hand your warm touch thaws my heart and your voice like an angel brings comfort to my soul.
I watch you twirl in the wind as it rushes through your hair, your grace mimics that of a dancing leaf gliding on the wind, all the while the sun beams glisten around you.
As night comes, and darkness falls, you’re sweet and kind nature glows brighter then the moon and stars in heaven, forever lighting my way through the darkness of this world.
But if and when ever you feel the light inside you fade and feel a tight grip of pain, sorrow, and loneliness wrap your heart, I will take your hand and guide you along this dark path that I have traveled many times before and bring you back into the warm world of light, compassion, comfort, and love.
When the day ends and night falls, I will hold you close to my body, I will wrap my arms around you and protect you from your nightmares by taking them into my self, all the while keeping you warm with my beating heart.
As we lay here together embracing each other with passion and love, I fall asleep in your arms and you in mine, until the morning comes.
"MY DEAR... I GIVE YOU THE CAPELLAN CONFEDERATION"AND THUS THE WAR WAS STARTED NOT BY GUN SHOT BUT BY WEDDING BELLS
Kiani Haki22 (Jun 16, 2008)
1st poem- It was good I liked the fact that you rhymed.....I also like the fact you wrote it from your heart.
2nd poem- Kind of sad really and I believe that is true that your soul mate is borm when your born.....Sweet poem.
3rd poem- This one here is my favorite out of all three because is good and descriptive so parts Igot confused but that is because I read to fast sometimes...lol...but read over it again and I love this poem the most. keep on writing you are a great poem writer...it is very hard to find a good poem writer who writes from the soul and heart.
You are a good poem writer, and don't give up on love. I liked all 3 of them.
Thank you very much. And dont worry, I have not given up on love. I know there is some one out there for me.
"MY DEAR... I GIVE YOU THE CAPELLAN CONFEDERATION"AND THUS THE WAR WAS STARTED NOT BY GUN SHOT BUT BY WEDDING BELLS
Haruko Haruhara (Jun 18, 2008), Kiani Haki22 (Jun 16, 2008)
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