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Old Jan 14, 2009, 11:21 AM   #1 (permalink)
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My Heart
My heart has been broken into to and a long time ago.
When i was young i was a shiny heart but when i got to start a new life.
My heart was now dead and so i walk a lone with out no shine
in my heart, so im in the dark all alone
in the cold and all alone.
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Old Jan 14, 2009, 11:34 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: My heart

very interesting it makes me remeber the pain i feel in my heart for it is torn in two
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Old Jan 15, 2009, 01:02 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: My heart

OMG...
It's so sad...
But yeah..you could feel that way..
I know how that feels too...
But after that I began to long for the dark
More and more...
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Old Jan 22, 2009, 03:44 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: My heart

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My Heart
My heart has been broken into to and a long time ago.
When i was young i was a shiny heart but when i got to start a new life.
My heart was now dead and so i walk a lone with out no shine
in my heart, so im in the dark all alone
in the cold and all alone.
not bad but you speak of the light too much><><><><><><><<>
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Old Feb 24, 2009, 11:47 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: My heart

Hey My heart is not a toy ok bobby i just want to show how i feel!
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Old Feb 24, 2009, 11:53 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: My heart

Its a good base to start off on, but tell us who and exactly how they did this to your heart. And why the shine is gone. Describe the darkness compared to the shine.
Like i aid before this is very good. Just a few kinks.
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Re: My heart

i can see ur heart now
dont worry
there is life in ur heart
u have strong heart my friend
have a nice day

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Re: My heart

You don't walk alone.. You have people there and who stand by your side, always. Someday you'll find the right girl for you and I know that when that time comes your heart will be whole again. ^^ So don't give up.
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