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    My Heart
    My heart has been broken into to and a long time ago.
    When i was young i was a shiny heart but when i got to start a new life.
    My heart was now dead and so i walk a lone with out no shine
    in my heart, so im in the dark all alone
    in the cold and all alone.
    The world isn't ready for the truth...

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    Re: My heart

    very interesting it makes me remeber the pain i feel in my heart for it is torn in two
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: My heart

    OMG...
    It's so sad...
    But yeah..you could feel that way..
    I know how that feels too...
    But after that I began to long for the dark
    More and more...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Re: My heart

    Quote Originally Posted by lessaangel View Post
    My Heart
    My heart has been broken into to and a long time ago.
    When i was young i was a shiny heart but when i got to start a new life.
    My heart was now dead and so i walk a lone with out no shine
    in my heart, so im in the dark all alone
    in the cold and all alone.
    not bad but you speak of the light too much><><><><><><><<>
    ><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>< >
    His bell is tolling for you

    He wants you to come home

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    Re: My heart

    Hey My heart is not a toy ok bobby i just want to show how i feel!
    K
    The world isn't ready for the truth...

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    Re: My heart

    Its a good base to start off on, but tell us who and exactly how they did this to your heart. And why the shine is gone. Describe the darkness compared to the shine.
    Like i aid before this is very good. Just a few kinks.
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    Re: My heart

    i can see ur heart now
    dont worry
    there is life in ur heart
    u have strong heart my friend
    have a nice day
    Last edited by boss; Feb 24, 2009 at 12:59 PM.

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    Re: My heart

    You don't walk alone.. You have people there and who stand by your side, always. Someday you'll find the right girl for you and I know that when that time comes your heart will be whole again. ^^ So don't give up.
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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