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    Well my heart can never be free so its never going to find someone but the only think is i walk alone in the world!
    The world isn't ready for the truth...

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    Re: My heart

    Well i know that you're saying that you wont find someone, but i really hope you do ^^ and good poem, something almost anyone can relate to. Goood job

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    Re: My heart

    My heart has been broken into to and a long time ago.
    When i was young i was a shiny heart but when i got to start a new life.
    My heart was now dead and so i walk a lone with out no shine
    in my heart, so im in the dark all alone
    in the cold and all alone.
    Oh what a sad poem.[sobs]..>>>
    and like the way you expreesed your emotions...>>>
    I almost felt like crying..>>>
    I feeled the pain and was also a heartbreaking story of your`s less...>>
    Well in that case you should take some advices in your friends..>>>
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: My heart

    The Poem was about how everyone feels when someone breaks there heart or lost some one and also how i feel now i can not stop it from the dark!
    I have never found anyone to bring the light back from the shatterd peaces off the ground just being stepped on and thus just dust in the wind!
    The world isn't ready for the truth...

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