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    My Heart is Beating

    My heart is beating
    Faster and faster
    Is it in my head?
    The love for him?
    Or is it real?

    My heart is beating like a drum
    The loud booms
    They fill my ears.

    My heart is beating
    Thinking of his warmth
    The comforting hugs
    The passionate kiss

    My heart is beating
    Longing for his smile
    His comforting
    Him.

    My heart is beating faster and faster
    It’s not in my head
    But in my heart

    My heart is beating
    To the love
    Between him and me.

    Well Thats it I hope you like.(^.^)
    Last edited by Kasai; Feb 26, 2007 at 08:01 AM. Reason: The color clashed with the board.

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    Re: My Heart is Beating

    You need to change the font because it clashes with the color of the board.
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    Re: My Heart is Beating

    good poem but u need to dchange the colour of the words
    I love beautiful carnage.

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    Re: My Heart is Beating

    It was good... but when I read the line you put...
    Well Thats it I hope you like.(^.^)
    it made me forget about what I had just read. LOL I can understand how you feel in this poem, so I like it even more. ^_^ Keep up the good work. ^_^

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    Re: My Heart is Beating

    Yep, I know how it is to feel overpowered by your passionately beating heart. To be so caught up in "him", you can't tell if its your head or heart doing all the thinking.... Your poem really captures that feeling. Good work.
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    Re: My Heart is Beating

    Very nice poem, princess! Reminds me of the song "My Heart Beats Like A Drum" by ATC. Keep it up!

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    Re: My Heart is Beating

    Good structure,very thoughtful and interesting ideas.But i hate the font.No offense.

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    Re: My Heart is Beating

    I loved it reminds me of me with my bf lol........
    Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday

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