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My heart is beating
Faster and faster
Is it in my head?
The love for him?
Or is it real?
My heart is beating like a drum
The loud booms
They fill my ears.
My heart is beating
Thinking of his warmth
The comforting hugs
The passionate kiss
My heart is beating
Longing for his smile
His comforting
Him.
My heart is beating faster and faster
It’s not in my head
But in my heart
My heart is beating
To the love
Between him and me.
Well Thats it I hope you like.(^.^)
Last edited by Kasai; Feb 26, 2007 at 07:01 AM. Reason: The color clashed with the board.
You need to change the font because it clashes with the color of the board.
Seduced by Flesh
good poem but u need to dchange the colour of the words
I love beautiful carnage.
It was good... but when I read the line you put...it made me forget about what I had just read. LOL I can understand how you feel in this poem, so I like it even more. ^_^ Keep up the good work. ^_^Well Thats it I hope you like.(^.^)
Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.
Yep, I know how it is to feel overpowered by your passionately beating heart. To be so caught up in "him", you can't tell if its your head or heart doing all the thinking.... Your poem really captures that feeling. Good work.
... Not Ever Again...
Very nice poem, princess! Reminds me of the song "My Heart Beats Like A Drum" by ATC. Keep it up!
Good structure,very thoughtful and interesting ideas.But i hate the font.No offense.
I loved it reminds me of me with my bf lol........
Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday
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