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    Re: My Heart is Beating

    It's a nice poem. Just work on the punctuation. I liked the way you went with this poem and there could have been more added to it. I feel like you wanted more but you stopped because you didn't want to mess it up or you thought you would. All in all I give it a 4/5
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    I like it... it is a good job. Just the punctuation needs to be worked, that's it. I really like it. It brought me bad memories though... not your fault. Keep doing more works!!!!
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    Re: My Heart is Beating

    Lebby please don't use that font it hurts peoples eyes. I can see how it brought bad memories but then you just look past them and look forward till you feel those things again Lebby.
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