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  1. Jul 18, 2006 11:16 AM #1
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    My heart's timer has stopped its clicking.

    I love you.
    It's that simple.

    Why then...do we both insist on ruining our love?

    Why do I hate you so?

    ..you cheat on me...you hurt me...yet....i can' t stop loving you.

    you ask for forgiveness and i don't give that luxury to you.

    I can't.

    I've convinced myself I don't love you.

    I've convinced myself you are a monster who will trample over my fragile heart again and again.

    You keep coming back.

    I have moved on. And yet....what?

    There's this horrid emptiness creeping in my chest...something telling me.....a voice...a name.

    its yours.

    I want you back.
    I want you back.

    I can't take you back though. Our time has come to its end.

    We are no more.

    and yet... I love you...


    Thankx Pyro, for this awesome sig! ^ ^



  2. Jul 18, 2006 11:18 AM #2
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    Re: My heart's timer has stopped its clicking.

    verry tragic and true lavie ilike this alot
    you really know how to express how love is
    when its took advantage of
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself
  3. Jul 18, 2006 11:21 AM #3
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    Re: My heart's timer has stopped its clicking.

    PAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIN...............everywhere!Go od poem, should check mine though......Cheaters suck!
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.
  4. Jul 18, 2006 11:30 AM #4
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    Re: My heart's timer has stopped its clicking.

    A very sad and beutiful poem, these words truly express ones true love for another...but that they cannot reachother anymore. These crys will never be heard, only remembered.
  5. Jul 18, 2006 12:52 PM #5
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    Re: My heart's timer has stopped its clicking.

    thank you guys.....its what came from my heart.......*slight smile*

    Thankx Pyro, for this awesome sig! ^ ^



  6. Jul 19, 2006 11:03 AM #6
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    Re: My heart's timer has stopped its clicking.

    tht's wut makes a good poem....tht the feelings are put into the poem n they are true....regradless of whether they'er painful of not...it would become a good poem

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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    Re: My heart's timer has stopped its clicking.

    *ahem* *looks at two person who has posted in this thread* *coughs*
    AHEM... XD XD
    ignore me ^^;;;

    Yes...a beautiful and painful poem (that doesnt sound right )
    The emotion was really real...it was as if i could see the poet in that state....
    Nice one
  8. Jul 20, 2006 05:08 AM #8
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    Re: My heart's timer has stopped its clicking.

    haha Elie funny ^^

    You could really feel the pain in this, kinda tragic..

    This bit ~ Why do I hate you so?

    ..you cheat on me...you hurt me...yet....i can' t stop loving you.

    You answered yourself.. ^^;;

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*
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