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  • Good but needs work

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  • Eh, sorta nice I guess.....

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Thread: My Home Is Nowhere

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    §-Breakdown-§ Breakout Champion, Bubble Popper Champion Akura13 may be famous one day Akura13's Avatar
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    My Home Is Nowhere

    I have to leave sometime
    But it's impossible
    Why don't I go home?
    Because home is nowhere
    I go home to an abusive cousin
    He dosen't even care
    It's so lonely and quiet
    No one to talk to
    Your home is like paradise
    People who love you
    People to talk to you
    You don't know how lucky you are
    My home is like
    Walking into a nightmare
    I'd go anywhere else but my home
    Because my home is nowhere.....



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    Re: My Home Is Nowhere

    it's good... it has something to it...

    but i think if you developed the feelings a bit more, maybe give a bit more form to the poem itself. i think that would have made it a lot better...

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    Re: My Home Is Nowhere

    I could relate to this in some way in my past years... Where I didn't want to go home... I'd rather stay at a friends place... I get the feeling of despair when I read it... Probably cause I have felt like that at one point of time...

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    Re: My Home Is Nowhere

    I really, really like this poem, because it has a lot of thought in it, it should make people think and realize how happy they should be about having a home with loving family, it did make me realize... nice work

    A really nice work Akura!!!!

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    Re: My Home Is Nowhere

    It was awsome, but it makes you think about my live up until now.
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    Re: My Home Is Nowhere

    a need of someone who would appreciate you..
    kinda sad,,,and emotional,,,

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