My Insanity

Black iron crosses hung on a crimson wall,
A perfectly painted picture of pride before the fall,
Steely blade of silver gripped in a crimson hand ,
Seeing your reflection in the mirror where I stand .


Drag it a little deeper make my body numb,
Take away the hate I feel with each drop of blood,
My life lay on the floor its color a magnificent shade,
I painted you this picture with a rusty razor blade.


Pain and hate fill my soul, it bleeds,
Thriving for the comfort and desire that it needs,
Empty eyes stare back at me,
And this is what they plea.


Drag it a little deeper make my body numb,
Take away the hate I feel with each drop of blood,
My life lay on the floor its color a magnificent shade,
I painted you this picture with a rusty razor blade.


Kill me now but kill me slow,
The pain I want to feel,
Give me what I'll never know,
Show me what isn't real.


Drag it a little deeper make my body numb,
Take away the hate I feel with each drop of blood,
My life lay on the floor its color a magnificent shade,
I painted you this picture with a rusty razor blade.

That was a very interesting and dark poem. It would be great for halloween. I look forward to reading more.

Y'know. I really like this poem. Its very well written, and the rhyme and rythm of it is very smooth. :thumb:

Quote:

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Kill me now but kill me slow,
The pain I want to feel,
Give me what ill never know,
Show me what isn't real.

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Another wonderful dark write. I've quoted my favorite stanza... It sounds so awesome I just had to quote it. ^_^ I've read phrases similar too this stanza written by other people too. It's a want that many people seem to want to have. Good job! Keep them coming!!!