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    My Life

    I am deprived
    Never getting what I want
    What I need

    Those around me
    Fool me with their
    Fake plastic smiles

    The lies proving false
    And their intentions always,
    always selfish

    Lying to my face
    And making me
    Smile through their falsehoods

    Living in this
    world of conceited,
    conceited Democracy

    But all I am
    All I can ever become
    is a slave to circumstance

    My destiny,
    my fate
    forever predetermined

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    Now don't everyone start criticizing me on my poem, no I don't hate my life and all around it.. this was an English assignment, 'think of how the world has betrayed you,' kind of thing..
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: My Life

    Nice poem man, it was pretty kool.

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    Re: My Life

    Lying to my face
    And making me
    Smile through their falsehoods

    This was the best stanza to the poem.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: My Life

    Even for an English assignment this was awesome! You did a great job putting yourself in perspective that often sways peoples out look on life! Great Job! 5 out 5

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