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Reply With QuoteIt's really REALLY good! You're right, writting it this way does make it flow better. But, you're really good. ^ ^ *two thumbs up*
Do not fallow me into the darkness, just leave me to be. Yet stay there so when I need it I can find you my light. Till the day you will strengthen me once more, remember my face as I remember yours and I can see the smile on your face again. Leave me to drown in my fears but don't give up on me my light. I would be blind without you.
i know it's kinda short but what can i say... .lol and i left it in paragraph form....i dono i just think it makes it flow better.. anyway i would love to hear what u think of it ^^
It's really REALLY good! You're right, writting it this way does make it flow better. But, you're really good. ^ ^ *two thumbs up*
I think I've known you all along.
I just lost your face in the crowed for a while.
I think I've been holding my breath all my life, until you found me here tonight.
So ask me now and I'll run away with you.
mere (Jan 21, 2009)
Its an awesome poemit must have came from the heart.
Martin Z
mere (Jan 21, 2009)
Hey i read your poem.....i think it is good and i want to here more Mere!!
The world isn't ready for the truth...
mere (Jan 21, 2009)
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