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    My Little One

    How are you my little one?
    I know it's been a while.
    I wish to spend some time with you,
    and get to see your smile.

    I need to show you how much I care
    and how much I love you so.
    And I hope that one day you will
    understand me once you grow.

    The distance between us will surely
    die. I make this guarantee.
    The battles between your mother
    and I will end, hopefully.

    Until then, my handsome child,
    be patient for the day.
    That I can have more time with you
    so we can run and play.


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    Re: My Little One

    That is really deep and so very touching. You really have the deep desire to reaffirm a stretched or lost link. I love it. Great job! Keep it up!

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: My Little One

    Quote Originally Posted by NevesElocin View Post
    That is really deep and so very touching. You really have the deep desire to reaffirm a stretched or lost link. I love it. Great job! Keep it up!
    Thank you! ^_^
    I'm glad you like this poem. I've just been doin' nothing but thinking, and I figured that I should start expressing my thoughts again. I hadn't written any new poetry in a while--lately, my work has been garbage--and thought this would be a good one to start with.

    I appreciate your comment/input. Thanks again! ^_^


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    Re: My Little One

    this is such a sweet poem. i like it very much. i always like your poems. well good luck on your next one!! =)

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    WOW...you seem happy and sad at the same time, But the poem is really sweet and cute...it's like you're expressing yourself in every word in this poem



    i love it

    ^^

    -zainab

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    Re: My Little One

    I think he will understand how much you as a father wants to be in his life & how much you care that's no doubt... I like it when you write about you & your son it seems that is when your feelings mix in all together with each other or maybe I am a big ol' sapp since me & my father is at a fall out... Keep up the good work!!!

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    Re: My Little One

    @.@ wow... u better keep that promise....

    Nicely done.. very deep and touching... nicely done... keep up the good work... *salutes*

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