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    My Love

    Eveything's distorted and torn
    My pain is like the rose's thorns
    Oh, how I wished I could turn back time
    Everyone's lives is filled with lies
    You are the truth I could see
    You have my heart and setted me free
    Keep on loving me, I'll be fine
    You're the reason I smile
    Is this a sign?

    Just keep on loving me
    You are my sun, my sun shines so bright
    You made it seem like everything's alright
    You are my dark moon, you hold what's half of me
    I finally know who I am, who to be
    I don't want to lose you
    I want you to be mine
    I won't know what to do
    I'm going crazy in my mind
    What's this feeling you're giving me?

    You hold what's half of me
    You have my heart, take care of it
    I'm in love with you, can't you see?
    All the pains, I'll make it
    Just keep on loving me
    I'll be fine
    Hold me tight and close
    Don't ever let go
    My love for you is going crazy
    Shield me with your sweet words
    We'll be together for long
    I'll be thinking of you when you're gone.
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: My Love

    Good work, I enjoyed reading this. Keep it up!

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    Re: My Love

    Keep it up! A sweet and awesome poem ^_^

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    Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ^_^
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: My Love

    Don't ever let go
    My love for you is going crazy
    Shield me with your sweet words
    We'll be together for long
    I'll be thinking of you when you're gone

    i like this part of the poem its said but at the same time it trys
    to keep you happy . i have been through alot of thing s like this
    my self but its been a while since i have had to say good buy to
    someone. i hope it dosnt happen again soon becuase its something
    thats hard to get over. this is a vert awesome poem and i wil save this
    to my note pad and read it again later if you dont mind
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    oh, nope! I don't mind. i'm glad you like it ^_^ thanks. I dedicate that to someone whom I really love right now, and hoping that he doesn't go away like my last one did.
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: My Love

    Its awesome i wonder who can that lucky to have so much feeling to u.
    but this is great!
    i love it chica



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: My Love

    muy bein. love it.

    and silent assasin. your sig is way to big

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