My love

KuwiRules145 · Jun 19, 2007, 08:47 AM

I hold your hand so tightly
We both death will do us brightly
I ask you to marry me
As you reply can we?

There on our hearts became divide
Does this happen to whoever is bride
Our happiness
Is a feather that turns to darkness

Will death do us part from our heart
Or love do us part from the start
As my tears become to an ocean of shame
Does that make me lame?

I love you as always
But do you love me anyways?
I can see
That faith doesn't want us to be

But I don't care
Just let yours and my heart share
So we can be one
Since you are that only someone

I just sit with the moon
Waiting for that shooting star soon
You came saying I love you
I love you too

Ok then....I hope you all like it!

Little negi sensei · Jun 19, 2007, 08:58 AM

I really enjoyed this poem inparticualler.the way it was written and the words that you used really helped with the main idea.another great poem.

!Mini Dev · Jun 19, 2007, 08:59 AM

How are you so amazing at writing poems you really have a talent

another 5 star fanaza

KuwiRules145 · Jun 19, 2007, 09:07 AM

I thank you both really so YEAH!!!!!!!!!! Well I still thank you all!!!!

!levitatinganimelover · Jun 19, 2007, 10:03 AM

that was a great poem much better than the ones i write

KuwiRules145 · Jun 19, 2007, 10:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by levitatinganimelover

that was a great poem much better than the ones i write

Don't say that! You write very great poems!!! Really! And thank you for your comment! And I do love your poems so much!

halo3master · Jun 19, 2007, 10:21 AM

means something deep to me that i jst put into words great poem

KuwiRules145 · Jun 19, 2007, 10:28 AM

I thank you for your comment! Really! I really thank you!

Jun 19, 2007, 08:47 AM	#1 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	My love I hold your hand so tightly We both death will do us brightly I ask you to marry me As you reply can we? There on our hearts became divide Does this happen to whoever is bride Our happiness Is a feather that turns to darkness Will death do us part from our heart Or love do us part from the start As my tears become to an ocean of shame Does that make me lame? I love you as always But do you love me anyways? I can see That faith doesn't want us to be But I don't care Just let yours and my heart share So we can be one Since you are that only someone I just sit with the moon Waiting for that shooting star soon You came saying I love you I love you too Ok then....I hope you all like it! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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Jun 19, 2007, 08:58 AM	#2 (permalink)
Little negi sensei Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 359 Thanks: 13 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 1,076	Re: My love I really enjoyed this poem inparticualler.the way it was written and the words that you used really helped with the main idea.another great poem. __________________
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Jun 19, 2007, 08:59 AM	#3 (permalink)
!Mini Dev Banned Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 1,117 Thanks: 41 Thanked 25 Times in 25 Posts Credits: -80	Re: My love How are you so amazing at writing poems you really have a talent another 5 star fanaza
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Jun 19, 2007, 09:07 AM	#4 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: My love I thank you both really so YEAH!!!!!!!!!! Well I still thank you all!!!! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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Jun 19, 2007, 10:03 AM	#5 (permalink)
!levitatinganimelover Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 165 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -20	Re: My love that was a great poem much better than the ones i write
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Welcome to AnimeOnline.net, your personal Anime Community!	Anime Online Rulez!

Jun 19, 2007, 10:21 AM	#7 (permalink)
halo3master Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: covenant homeplanet Posts: 333 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 425	Re: My love means something deep to me that i jst put into words great poem __________________
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Jun 19, 2007, 10:28 AM	#8 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: My love I thank you for your comment! Really! I really thank you! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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