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    My love

    I hold your hand so tightly
    We both death will do us brightly
    I ask you to marry me
    As you reply can we?

    There on our hearts became divide
    Does this happen to whoever is bride
    Our happiness
    Is a feather that turns to darkness

    Will death do us part from our heart
    Or love do us part from the start
    As my tears become to an ocean of shame
    Does that make me lame?

    I love you as always
    But do you love me anyways?
    I can see
    That faith doesn't want us to be

    But I don't care
    Just let yours and my heart share
    So we can be one
    Since you are that only someone

    I just sit with the moon
    Waiting for that shooting star soon
    You came saying I love you
    I love you too

    Ok then....I hope you all like it!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: My love

    I really enjoyed this poem inparticualler.the way it was written and the words that you used really helped with the main idea.another great poem.

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    Re: My love

    How are you so amazing at writing poems you really have a talent

    another 5 star fanaza

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    Re: My love

    I thank you both really so YEAH!!!!!!!!!! Well I still thank you all!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: My love

    that was a great poem much better than the ones i write

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    Re: My love

    Quote Originally Posted by levitatinganimelover View Post
    that was a great poem much better than the ones i write
    Don't say that! You write very great poems!!! Really! And thank you for your comment! And I do love your poems so much!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: My love

    means something deep to me that i jst put into words great poem

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    Re: My love

    I thank you for your comment! Really! I really thank you!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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