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    ~My Love~

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    EDIT: Dragon Ball
    See CREDITS in last post of this thread. Please do NOT rip other's work. Get permission first. Thank you.
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    On the wings of an eagle
    My love for you flies
    Soaring higher and higher
    And touching the skies

    I reached up above
    And pulled a star from the sky
    To place it within
    Your precious minds eye

    To dwell there forever
    As my love for you
    On the wings of our love
    Enduring and true

    I honor you my darling
    With all that I am
    Please darling please
    Will you be my guy

    There are so many things
    My heart wants to say
    I love you sweetheart
    There is no other way
    Last edited by Dragon Ball; Oct 14, 2007 at 06:42 PM.

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    Re: ~My Love~

    wow... this is very nice and sweet.. ^^ i like it.. way to go ^^ keep up the good work
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    Re: ~My Love~

    Quote Originally Posted by Jamie5192 View Post
    On the wings of an eagle
    My love for you flies
    Soaring higher and higher
    And touching the skies

    I reached up above
    And pulled a star from the sky
    To place it within
    Your precious minds eye

    To dwell there forever
    As my love for you
    On the wings of our love
    Enduring and true

    I honor you my darling
    With all that I am
    Please darling please
    Will you be my guy

    There are so many things
    My heart wants to say
    I love you sweetheart
    There is no other way
    The ABCB rhyme scheme is simple but effective. This is a poem very pregnant with meaning . . .

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    Re: ~My Love~

    Quote Originally Posted by divine_punishment View Post
    The ABCB rhyme scheme is simple but effective. This is a poem very pregnant with meaning . . .
    um... okay? didn't realize i did an ABCB thing.. but thank you. Yes it is... or at least it should be. I put a lot into this poem and i'm glad you guys like it.

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    Re: ~My Love~

    I love that poem!!!
    The words and the rhythm is perfect for the title!!!!!
    Great job!!!
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    Re: ~My Love~

    "A Blue Star in your eye" by Jo'Lene Tover
    A Blue Star in Your Eye

    Nice Try.

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    Re: ~My Love~

    I have receved the below email from the original author. Please do not rip other's work. First get permission from them if you want to use their poems / images etc. Thank you.

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    This poem that has been renamed "Our Love" is actually called "A Blue Star in Your Eye" I wrote this poem. My name is Jo'Lene Tover and the original can be found at Poetry.com. I am flattered that someone thought that it was good enough to want it to be their own but lets be fair and give credit where credit is due. The person that claims to have written this said that she spent a lot of time on it when actually it was very easy for me to write because it came from my heart.

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    Re: ~My Love~

    I would rather not see anything in the poetry section that isn't original work by the poster, credit given or not. It's little more than spam to post a work and say only "This isn't mine, but I like it".
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