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    My love(I think I shed a tear after I finished it)

    You ask me to find a movie
    I say yes my love
    You ask me to make some dinner
    I say yes my love
    You ask me to help you in bed
    I say yes my love

    Later in life when all is gone
    You ask me to follow you in the after life
    I say yes my love
    You ask me to walk in the gate's of heaven
    I say yes my love


    All I'm trying to say is I will do any thing for
    you for you are the love of my life.

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    Re: My love(I think I shed a tear after I finished it)

    Sounds like a few poems I've read before. I like the subject.
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    Re: My love(I think I shed a tear after I finished it)

    I liked it cause it showed how devoted you are to the one you loved. Good job and I look forward to reading your next one.
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