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    Smile my love poem

    My Only One
    My love is strong
    My love is true
    The only one I love
    Will always be you

    I will never hurt you
    Never put you down
    I will stay true
    Forever and all time

    So will you stay true?
    Will you be there?

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    Re: my love poem

    The ending sounds like u have doubts..

    Hmm this is short and straight to the point.. simple and easily understandable.. nicely done ^^ keep up the good work

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    Re: my love poem

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    The ending sounds like u have doubts..

    Hmm this is short and straight to the point.. simple and easily understandable.. nicely done ^^ keep up the good work
    ya...i agree with rayme that you might have doubts... :P

    but the poem is nicely done ^_^
    short and sweet. and very easy to understand. ^.^

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    Re: my love poem

    its a really nice poem. but it sounds like the other person isnt true to you. but none the less it was a nice poem!! =)

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    wow, nice poem!!!! keep up!!!! love to hear more from you!!!
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    love is an emotion that flows through everyone no matter who or where you are"

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    Re: my love poem

    Quote Originally Posted by mveli2 View Post
    My Only One
    My love is strong
    My love is true
    The only one I love
    Will always be you

    I will never hurt you
    Never put you down
    I will stay true
    Forever and all time

    So will you stay true?
    Will you be there?
    Really sweet and cute for First time I think ...
    and short too ...I like the feeling there ..
    but you will improve boy...
    Nice work ...^^

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    Re: my love poem

    aww thats sweet its kinda like the stuff i write ^^

    it would be real nice in a card lol ^__^ great job!!!

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    thanks equinn and you know thats a good idea thanks everyone for your comments

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