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Reply With QuoteJamie this is very good.
I could feel the pain coming from the poem myself.
I bow to you master of the painful poem
Just the thought of it hurts
Rips my heart in two
All the pain i'm going through
Just because of you
What happened to the memories
The love we once shared
The smile that came to my face
Knowing that you were there
Death comes too soon for some
Not soon enough for others
Which will it be for me
when is it my time to die
I can always decide
But right now my time will bide
I will live with this hurt
The lies and betrayal
The secrets that were hidden
Left in the dark
Now all i ask
What is there left for me
Everywhere i turn
You are looking back at me
I won't live on
The pain you gave me will be gone
No longer will i suffer
Feel the dispair
I know it's my fault
The hurt gave to you
None of it compares though
To what i feel for you
Now it doesn't matter
My journey on earth is done
Know that i loved you
Till the very end
So I now say my final goodbye
I'll see you when you arrive
To this place above
Whenever you die
I don't know if it makes any sense to you... and if it doesn't please let me know.. but all i say to you is just let it show...The love you feel for one.. never hold back.. it's not something to be afraid of...
Jamie this is very good.
I could feel the pain coming from the poem myself.
I bow to you master of the painful poem
It's a really good poem. I like it. It's nice, painful, and revitalizing at the same time. Good.
A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
Oh wow.
that was great. It was awsome.
I am like speachless.
It has so much emotion, and it speaks stright to the soul.
I love it alot.
Keep it up.
Hope to see more.
I'ts a lovely poem Jamie. And I understand how you feel. Good job and keep on writing. ^__^v
Thanx zyta for the awesome set
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it's a sad poem jamie but i know how you feel.you are very sadi could see that from the way you wrote the poem.i hope you'll feel better soon.the poem it's beautifull.
keep up the good work!
"If you need something to worship, then worship life - all life, every last crawling bit of it! We're all in this beauty together!" - Frank Herbert
Thank you.. all of you.. It's nice to know that I can still write poems well even through the toughest times.... I put my heart and soul into this one.. I wrote it today... actually i wrote it as i was posting it..... thank you, once again, for your comments...
Jamie I agree with everyone here. even though it is sad and I feel it to yes. but even though it is sad it is a great poem. I can tell how your feeling just reading it. great job never give up and keep writing I hope to read more.
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