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    ~My Love Story~

    Just the thought of it hurts
    Rips my heart in two
    All the pain i'm going through
    Just because of you

    What happened to the memories
    The love we once shared
    The smile that came to my face
    Knowing that you were there

    Death comes too soon for some
    Not soon enough for others

    Which will it be for me
    when is it my time to die
    I can always decide
    But right now my time will bide

    I will live with this hurt
    The lies and betrayal
    The secrets that were hidden
    Left in the dark

    Now all i ask
    What is there left for me
    Everywhere i turn
    You are looking back at me

    I won't live on
    The pain you gave me will be gone
    No longer will i suffer
    Feel the dispair

    I know it's my fault
    The hurt gave to you
    None of it compares though
    To what i feel for you

    Now it doesn't matter
    My journey on earth is done

    Know that i loved you
    Till the very end

    So I now say my final goodbye
    I'll see you when you arrive
    To this place above
    Whenever you die


    I don't know if it makes any sense to you... and if it doesn't please let me know.. but all i say to you is just let it show...The love you feel for one.. never hold back.. it's not something to be afraid of...

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    Re: ~My Love Story~

    Jamie this is very good.
    I could feel the pain coming from the poem myself.
    I bow to you master of the painful poem

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    Re: ~My Love Story~

    It's a really good poem. I like it. It's nice, painful, and revitalizing at the same time. Good.

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Oh wow.
    that was great. It was awsome.
    I am like speachless.

    It has so much emotion, and it speaks stright to the soul.

    I love it alot.
    Keep it up.
    Hope to see more.

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    Re: ~My Love Story~

    I'ts a lovely poem Jamie. And I understand how you feel. Good job and keep on writing. ^__^v

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    Re: ~My Love Story~

    it's a sad poem jamie but i know how you feel.you are very sad i could see that from the way you wrote the poem.i hope you'll feel better soon.the poem it's beautifull.
    keep up the good work!

    "If you need something to worship, then worship life - all life, every last crawling bit of it! We're all in this beauty together!" - Frank Herbert

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    Thank you.. all of you.. It's nice to know that I can still write poems well even through the toughest times.... I put my heart and soul into this one.. I wrote it today... actually i wrote it as i was posting it..... thank you, once again, for your comments...

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    Re: ~My Love Story~

    Jamie I agree with everyone here. even though it is sad and I feel it to yes. but even though it is sad it is a great poem. I can tell how your feeling just reading it. great job never give up and keep writing I hope to read more.
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