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    my love for you

    my love for you is what keeps me going
    knowing you love me and i will always love you
    keeping you in my mind makes me gigggle in delight
    i see you and cant help but turn red
    i am with you and i never wanna leave
    although im yonger and your much older i still love you
    i wish to be with you
    cherish you
    hold you
    kiss you
    do everything in my power to make you happy
    i am yours and you are mine
    words cant descibe how im feeling because you just have to be here 2 see
    waiting until the day i can be with you again makes me count down those hours
    minutes
    even seconds
    i love you and it will always be that way
    im am yours and you are mine
    until death due us part



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    Re: my love for you

    wowowowow that was great I always like the love one better
    give off the strong unbreakable feel of loving someone like a first love or a true love......Not sure but could use some stucture.......other wise great

    Ps like the Pic

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    Re: my love for you

    Yeah....a love poem I actually like.......Your poetry skills are improving definitely. See......I told you you have talent.Keep it up.......
    Can that pic get any bigger?
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    Re: my love for you

    that poem was awsome u have some real talent.. i wish i was that talented
    and that banner is HUGE!!!!!
    there's nothing funny about a one eyed bunny


    that'll teach the fist person i see

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    Wow nice poem I knew you had a talent I hope the lucky guy reads it!

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    XD.Nice and great words u chose to use.
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    Re: my love for you

    nicely done...hope the guy u wrote for read this n realizes ur feelings for him...again this my personal opinion but i would to have this poem in stanza jus to make it easier to read either then tht it's good

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: my love for you

    very awesome poem and goes to prove that loves only barrrier is age
    thoug many dont agree. also the poem give you the idea wanting to be with
    them no matter the cost. very cool way put your heart out there
    just hope they dont step on it,
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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