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    My love for you

    my love for you

    My love for you burns like an inferno
    fire buildingup inside of me like an
    eternal desire.
    Rise and Rise my love does Rise
    it Rises higher than the light blue
    Each day each night each frightening
    sight all i seem to do is think of you.
    my love is still burning like a burning
    embishen. why did you curse me with
    this ensationnal obsetion.

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    Re: My love for you

    For the love of all that is good and fluffy: poets, take the 10 seconds you need to run your poems through spell-check. Nothing makes you look sillier burning embishen and ensationnal obsetion.

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