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    My love for you

    If you knew how much I love you,
    Could you comprehend,
    My love would give you wings,
    That would you to the heavens send.

    You would soar on these wings
    High above the trees,
    And “I will love you always”
    Would be whispered by the breeze/

    My love for you goes on and on
    Like the ocean tides that roar
    If my love were a liquid
    Over you it would forever pour

    The universe knows no end
    And my love, it is the same
    All of my prayers were answered
    When into my love you came.

    When time comes to an end
    And heaven on hearth is no more
    Our eternity together will be better
    Than anything that came before.

    You are my life and happiness,
    Without you I have no soul
    My love for you goes on and on
    Like the clouds that forever roll

    Though our lives haven’t been perfect
    I could never ask for more
    Having you hold me in your arms
    And saying “I love you more”

    And if I had to choose between death or life without you
    Life wouldn’t stand a chance
    I’d choose death without a though
    And without a backward glance

    I hope my love doesn’t scare you
    Or frighten you away
    But I needed you to know
    That “I love you” are more than just words I say

    -Dedicated to Kyle, whom of which I love and adore-
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: My love for you

    I was amazed in your poem...
    I hardly believe what I saw and read...
    it was sure a real love poem you got here...
    Only few members here are making 4 stanzas or less...
    I love your poem great!
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: My love for you

    it was very good, vivid details ^^ and your message was very clear. set in stone. beautiful take care.
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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