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    My Love For You're Crimson

    The blood i need ,so intoxicating
    The urge to feed,its so over whelming
    The need for you , i cant hold back my feeling's
    The crimson flowing through your body excites me.

    The air i breath ,is full of your fragrance
    The the sight of you,it makes my heart beat faster
    The lust of you,only makes me crazy for all that crimson
    The time has come for me to make my move on you.

    I aproach your side, like a mist that covers lakes and streams
    I love you so that it makes my body quiver with excitment
    Please my love, i want you to be with me for all eternity
    I would do anything to make you my darkest queen, under the light
    of the moon.

    You turn your head and notice my aproach i smile as i look at you
    Your neck so sweet like ,ivory on a key board playing a romantic song
    Your gaze it penatrates the heart of darkness i swear you could turn this
    dark heart light.
    Your now next to me shineing so brightly it blinds me i must have you
    You lean towards me as i take your body in my arms, the warmness
    of your flesh excites me ,as i smell your crimson treasure ,i must have you


    ok this one was way hard for me to do it had problems with keeping it
    flwing how i wanted but these words are what i wanted. hope everyone
    likes it and any comments or tips would help
    Last edited by HolderOfTheDarkChalice; Aug 24, 2006 at 05:33 PM.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: My Love For You're Crimson

    OMG!!! That was soooooooooooooooooooo awesome Big Bro!!!

    This was my fav. part "The blood i need ,so intoxicating
    The urge to feed,its so over whelming
    The need for you , i cant hold back my feeling's
    The crimson flowing through your body excites me.
    "
    This was such an awesome poem!!
    Last edited by Shinigami's_Angel; Aug 24, 2006 at 05:44 PM.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: My Love For You're Crimson

    I aproach your side, like a mist that covers lakes and streams
    I love you so that it makes my body quiver with excitment
    Please my love, i want you to be with me for all eternity
    I would do anything to make you my darkest queen, under the light
    of the moon
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    very dark...very romantic...............

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    Re: My Love For You're Crimson

    wow, i love it. it's dark and romantic. keep it up!
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: My Love For You're Crimson

    thats like'' muahahahahha'' poem
    its so awesome and the tittle increible



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: My Love For You're Crimson

    thanks im glad everyone lied it including you lil sis.
    i got the idea for this one from an AMV i am making right now
    im hoping it will be as good as my poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: My Love For You're Crimson

    oh i can't wait to see it! =D I'm sure it will be good as your poem.
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: My Love For You're Crimson

    que paso aqui?
    what u mean by lil sis??



    perdoname michelle!

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