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    My Mind

    My mind is the forest
    forever beautiful from start
    to finish.
    My ideas are flowers trampled
    by the stereotypical camper
    My dreams are humungous trees
    One hundred years strong
    cut down by reality’s lumberjack.
    My hopes are the strands of grass
    that grow rapidly
    After being badly burned by the dejected
    Flame of words.

    My mind is the forest
    that never dies,
    The forest
    seemingly forever.
    The forest.
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    I'm a solider of Pen and Paper!
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    Re: My Mind

    This poem is good!
    I give it 5 stars!
    Nice job Row!
    I like it.
    The world isn't ready for the truth...

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    Re: My Mind

    Wow, me likey

    It sounds complex at first, but it can be simple when you get into it. Its really good. Nice peice.

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    Re: My Mind

    that was realy good so good it was kind of inspiring your a great poet and that could be
    a good future job in the art world

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    Re: My Mind

    Got a nice poem here Shippo...>>
    Well its nice a poem..>>>
    Nice expression bout the forest and things around it...>>
    and also what you feel like the Trees or Plants...>>
    Keep going on a being good poet..>>>
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
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    Re: My Mind

    love the poem. I can appreciate it cause I am a poet as well. but it's really good.
    My signature pic!
    I absolutely love it!

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    Re: My Mind

    I am trying to decipher your sig.. o.O

    I loved all the metaphors in here. I just wish there was a bit more creative exlaination to some of the metaphors that were made. Like why and how it all relates.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: My Mind

    i like that its good........................................^^

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