"My mind is like a scary attic in an unused house"

!flaminghate · Jan 13, 2008, 02:04 AM

Full of unopened boxes which contain interesting but dangerous secrets,
Cobwebs over everything,
Photographs in broken frames as I forget people,
Or try your best to in anycase.

There is a bed that's never been slept in,
Because I never rest,
Its sheets are stiff with dust.

There are bookshelves with old books that I've read but forgotten about,
There are loose pages with angry words and poems on them,
Nothing is organized,
It seems like no one lives there but ghosts.

It's a fascinating place which is made up of secrets,
Darkness and memories.

LordCastigator · Jan 13, 2008, 07:07 AM

Nice work. Not bad at all.

Sounds like your head could be a bit like mine. Never knowing what is truly up there...

*Peach_follows* · Jan 14, 2008, 11:42 AM

Wow... I loved how you used items you would find in an old attic as metaphores for aspects of yourself. Very neat and clever. As always, its so refreashing to read your work.

Jan 13, 2008, 02:04 AM	#1 (permalink)
!flaminghate Banned Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Immortal, till I die Posts: 464 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 1,783	"My mind is like a scary attic in an unused house" Full of unopened boxes which contain interesting but dangerous secrets, Cobwebs over everything, Photographs in broken frames as I forget people, Or try your best to in anycase. There is a bed that's never been slept in, Because I never rest, Its sheets are stiff with dust. There are bookshelves with old books that I've read but forgotten about, There are loose pages with angry words and poems on them, Nothing is organized, It seems like no one lives there but ghosts. It's a fascinating place which is made up of secrets, Darkness and memories.
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Jan 13, 2008, 07:07 AM	#2 (permalink)
LordCastigator Pro Utilitate Hominum Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: You know that feeling, like you're being watched... Posts: 772 Thanks: 8 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 27,243	Re: "My mind is like a scary attic in an unused house" Nice work. Not bad at all. Sounds like your head could be a bit like mine. Never knowing what is truly up there... __________________ The A$$hole previously known as Daniel219 Thanks a million for this sig Pyro_psyco. Too true... My Gundam story. Please read it, please...
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Peach_follows Femmebot's feel nothing. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley Posts: 1,026 Thanks: 42 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 2,204	Re: "My mind is like a scary attic in an unused house" Wow... I loved how you used items you would find in an old attic as metaphores for aspects of yourself. Very neat and clever. As always, its so refreashing to read your work. __________________ Who needs a spray can, when you're a femmebot? http://www.myspace.com/j1gg481tt
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