+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 3 of 3

Thread: "My mind is like a scary attic in an unused house"

  1. #1
    Banned ABC Crazy Champion flaminghate may be famous one day flaminghate may be famous one day
    Join Date
    Dec 2006
    Location
    Immortal, till I die
    Posts
    464
    Thanks
    4
    Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts

    "My mind is like a scary attic in an unused house"

    Full of unopened boxes which contain interesting but dangerous secrets,
    Cobwebs over everything,
    Photographs in broken frames as I forget people,
    Or try your best to in anycase.

    There is a bed that's never been slept in,
    Because I never rest,
    Its sheets are stiff with dust.

    There are bookshelves with old books that I've read but forgotten about,
    There are loose pages with angry words and poems on them,
    Nothing is organized,
    It seems like no one lives there but ghosts.

    It's a fascinating place which is made up of secrets,
    Darkness and memories.

  2. #2
    Pro Utilitate Hominum LordCastigator may be famous one day LordCastigator may be famous one day LordCastigator's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2005
    Location
    You know that feeling, like you're being watched...
    Posts
    948
    Thanks
    8
    Thanked 19 Times in 19 Posts

    Re: "My mind is like a scary attic in an unused house"

    Nice work. Not bad at all.

    Sounds like your head could be a bit like mine. Never knowing what is truly up there...

    The Madman previously known as Daniel219

    Wish I could get on here more often. *Sigh* The down side to night shift...

  3. #3
    Femmebot Rehab Colt Crouse Champion, Bookworm Champion, Hangman Champion, Connect 2 Champion Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows has become well known Peach_follows's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2005
    Location
    Friendly Fridley
    Posts
    1,477
    Thanks
    124
    Thanked 140 Times in 121 Posts

    Re: "My mind is like a scary attic in an unused house"

    Wow... I loved how you used items you would find in an old attic as metaphores for aspects of yourself. Very neat and clever. As always, its so refreashing to read your work.
    ... Not Ever Again...

+ Reply to Thread

Similar Threads

  1. Replies: 1
    Last Post: May 11, 2006, 01:55 PM
  2. Replies: 30
    Last Post: Mar 18, 2005, 06:23 AM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts