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    My Only Dove

    Please forgive me for the things I’ve done
    After all, you are my shining sun
    It hurts to lose someone you love
    After all, you were my only dove
    So please forgive me so we can move on with our lives
    And I would be by your side ‘til the day you die
    Even if only a friend I’d want to be with you
    I pray to the heavens that this wish comes true
    "Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy,...it has no survival value, rather is one of those things that gives value to survival."
    C.S. Lewis

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    Re: My Only Dove

    I liked this poem you made, because the few lines said it all. It just hurts when you have done something bad that would eventually make your love draw herself/himself away from you. Does the dove used as a symbol in this poem? That interests me. So do keep up the good work.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: My Only Dove

    Bad title really did not care for your poem sorry to say.

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    Re: My Only Dove

    thanks raja, dove just symbolized something beautiful and precious

    and gungrave...thats ok that you didnt like my poem, but you dont tell me why. thats like saying you suck at driving, you dont give me anything to improve on.
    "Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy,...it has no survival value, rather is one of those things that gives value to survival."
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