Please forgive me for the things I’ve done
After all, you are my shining sun
It hurts to lose someone you love
After all, you were my only dove
So please forgive me so we can move on with our lives
And I would be by your side ‘til the day you die
Even if only a friend I’d want to be with you
I pray to the heavens that this wish comes true
"Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy,...it has no survival value, rather is one of those things that gives value to survival."
C.S. Lewis
I liked this poem you made, because the few lines said it all. It just hurts when you have done something bad that would eventually make your love draw herself/himself away from you. Does the dove used as a symbol in this poem? That interests me. So do keep up the good work.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
Bad title really did not care for your poem sorry to say.
thanks raja, dove just symbolized something beautiful and precious
and gungrave...thats ok that you didnt like my poem, but you dont tell me why. thats like saying you suck at driving, you dont give me anything to improve on.
"Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy,...it has no survival value, rather is one of those things that gives value to survival."
C.S. Lewis
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