My Only Dove

kamikazekrn · Aug 15, 2007, 02:01 PM

Please forgive me for the things I’ve done
After all, you are my shining sun
It hurts to lose someone you love
After all, you were my only dove
So please forgive me so we can move on with our lives
And I would be by your side ‘til the day you die
Even if only a friend I’d want to be with you
I pray to the heavens that this wish comes true

raja_psyche · Aug 15, 2007, 06:29 PM

I liked this poem you made, because the few lines said it all. It just hurts when you have done something bad that would eventually make your love draw herself/himself away from you. Does the dove used as a symbol in this poem? That interests me. So do keep up the good work.

!The GunGrave of Trigun · Aug 15, 2007, 07:03 PM

Bad title really did not care for your poem sorry to say.

kamikazekrn · Aug 16, 2007, 02:16 PM

thanks raja, dove just symbolized something beautiful and precious

and gungrave...thats ok that you didnt like my poem, but you dont tell me why. thats like saying you suck at driving, you dont give me anything to improve on.

Aug 15, 2007, 02:01 PM	#1 (permalink)
kamikazekrn Newbie Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: SoCali Posts: 46 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 219	My Only Dove Please forgive me for the things I’ve done After all, you are my shining sun It hurts to lose someone you love After all, you were my only dove So please forgive me so we can move on with our lives And I would be by your side ‘til the day you die Even if only a friend I’d want to be with you I pray to the heavens that this wish comes true __________________ "Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy,...it has no survival value, rather is one of those things that gives value to survival." C.S. Lewis
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Aug 15, 2007, 06:29 PM	#2 (permalink)
raja_psyche Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,497	Re: My Only Dove I liked this poem you made, because the few lines said it all. It just hurts when you have done something bad that would eventually make your love draw herself/himself away from you. Does the dove used as a symbol in this poem? That interests me. So do keep up the good work. __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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!The GunGrave of Trigun Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Hell Posts: 1,099 Thanks: 4 Thanked 23 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 21,401	Re: My Only Dove Bad title really did not care for your poem sorry to say.
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Aug 16, 2007, 02:16 PM	#4 (permalink)
kamikazekrn Newbie Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: SoCali Posts: 46 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 219	Re: My Only Dove thanks raja, dove just symbolized something beautiful and precious and gungrave...thats ok that you didnt like my poem, but you dont tell me why. thats like saying you suck at driving, you dont give me anything to improve on. __________________ "Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy,...it has no survival value, rather is one of those things that gives value to survival." C.S. Lewis
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