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Newbie | My Only Dove Please forgive me for the things I’ve done After all, you are my shining sun It hurts to lose someone you love After all, you were my only dove So please forgive me so we can move on with our lives And I would be by your side ‘til the day you die Even if only a friend I’d want to be with you I pray to the heavens that this wish comes true
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,497 | Re: My Only Dove I liked this poem you made, because the few lines said it all. It just hurts when you have done something bad that would eventually make your love draw herself/himself away from you. Does the dove used as a symbol in this poem? That interests me. So do keep up the good work.
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Newbie | Re: My Only Dove thanks raja, dove just symbolized something beautiful and precious and gungrave...thats ok that you didnt like my poem, but you dont tell me why. thats like saying you suck at driving, you dont give me anything to improve on.
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