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Aug 09, 2007, 10:32 PM
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| Banned Join Date: May 2007 Location: Wishing to go back to Japan...
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 Credits: 12,099 | My Only One My love is strong My love is true The only one I love Will always be you I will never hurt you Never put you down I will stay true Forever and all time So will you stay true? Will you be there? I believe you will Don't prove me wrong! ____________________ This poem dedicated to someone here On AO you know who you are!^^ |
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Aug 10, 2007, 05:41 AM
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 Femmebot's feel nothing.  Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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Credits: 2,204 | Re: My Only One I like how the poem started in rhyme, and the rhyme kind of faded behind the questions in the end. Very nice. |
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Aug 10, 2007, 08:27 AM
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Credits: 59,118 | Re: My Only One i agree with peachy~!  nice.. and short yet sweet... ^^ keep up the good work and i'll treat u something special akura  |
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Aug 10, 2007, 09:30 AM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 13,226 | Re: My Only One Just too romantic really! Such short poem could have a large amount of love in it thats from the heart! I simply loved it! I hope to see more! 
__________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ ♡♥Anime Life♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do  |
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