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  1. Aug 09, 2007 10:32 PM #1
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    My Only One

    My love is strong
    My love is true
    The only one I love
    Will always be you

    I will never hurt you
    Never put you down
    I will stay true
    Forever and all time

    So will you stay true?
    Will you be there?
    I believe you will
    Don't prove me wrong!
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    Re: My Only One

    awesome poem.^^ i really like it cuz ur speaking the truth from ur heart. its very sweet. good job.^^
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  3. Aug 10, 2007 05:41 AM #3
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    Re: My Only One

    I like how the poem started in rhyme, and the rhyme kind of faded behind the questions in the end. Very nice.
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  4. Aug 10, 2007 08:27 AM #4
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    Re: My Only One

    i agree with peachy~! nice.. and short yet sweet... ^^ keep up the good work and i'll treat u something special akura
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  5. Aug 10, 2007 09:30 AM #5
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    Re: My Only One

    Just too romantic really! Such short poem could have a large amount of love in it thats from the heart! I simply loved it! I hope to see more!
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