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The darkness dwells deep inside
within myself i cant confide
the trust is gone replaced by hate
cant control my life or fate
see the wrongs of earth provide
a reason, method of suicide
they say have faith in them it will be sunny
they want only power, sex, and money
i cant control my beating heart
the sky turns red, its about to start
thunder rumbles, screams and cries
this is the day humanity dies.
thats a pretty poem your good
Well, the first verse of stanza one capture m interest. Then? I found out that it was a rhyming poem... I'm not really a fan of rhyming poems. I do believe that a person can make poetry without the need to rhyme. And you? You did an okay job. It would be an even better poem with some vivd words thrown in for description and elaboration.
i like it SLATERSAN it was pretty good
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