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    my poem

    well I never though of myself of much a poet but i wrote this one day on another forum where i was ignored.........so i thought i'd post it here to see what u guys think.......i doesn't really follow any real lyrical pattern but still......



    Alone i stare into the darkness with emotionless eyes
    i can't feel warmth
    i can't feel pain
    i can't feel sadness
    i can only feel the cold numbness as dark and comsuming as the darkess that threatens to engulf me
    long has it been since i have felt anything
    a tear trickles down my cheek
    unfelt but still known
    faintly i remember the feeling but even more faint is the yearn to feel it again
    Only fear remains
    it's the only constant
    fear that if i try to change again
    I will only lose more of what is left
    so i bury my face in my hands and cry my unfelt tears for something forever lost....
    my humanity


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    Re: my poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Drkduality
    well I never though of myself of much a poet but i wrote this one day on another forum where i was ignored.........so i thought i'd post it here to see what u guys think.......i doesn't really follow any real lyrical pattern but still......



    Alone i stare into the darkness with emotionless eyes
    i can't feel warmth
    i can't feel pain
    i can't feel sadness
    i can only feel the cold numbness as dark and comsuming as the darkess that threatens to engulf me
    long has it been since i have felt anything
    a tear trickles down my cheek
    unfelt but still known
    faintly i remember the feeling but even more faint is the yearn to feel it again
    Only fear remains
    it's the only constant
    fear that if i try to change again
    I will only lose more of what is left
    so i bury my face in my hands and cry my unfelt tears for something forever lost....
    my humanity
    [B]If you write poems like this then why don't you make a book out of it?[/B]
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    Quote Originally Posted by kenchi18
    [B]If you write poems like this then why don't you make a book out of it?[/B]
    Other than that it's pretty good
    Last edited by kenchi18; Jul 05, 2006 at 11:48 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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