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    my poem

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    My Love Isn't A Toy

    I’ve been left here on the ground,
    For years without ever making a sound.
    I gave you my heart and then you ripped it in 2,
    But the love I have for is very true.
    Here on this land left to rot,
    After everything you took and got.
    You thought my love was a toy,
    You selfish, arrogant little boy.
    I’m glad to have found someone different and true,
    Some one who loves me and isn’t you.
    He helped me up and took my hand,
    Away from that place of nothing but sand.
    He put the pieces back together,
    And has changed my life forever.
    My love for you has been replaced,
    So have been the challenges you made me face.
    These are the last words I shall tell you,
    “Your such a fool for what you do,
    My place in my heart for you is done,
    And my new life with him has just begun.
    Word of advice before I go,
    Love like mine is hard find so,
    When some one loves you as much as I did,
    you know now not to act like a kid.
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    Re: my poem

    i really like that... it is really good it is a good way to get over someone
    Moving on Is the hardest Part

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    Re: my poem

    That is so darling keep it up that was a good way to get over my heart ache
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