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    My Poem

    Ok this is a poem I wrote after medatating. Tell me what all of you think and be honest.

    Thought I'm tearafyed I'm moving on
    Never to know what is to become of me
    Thoughts are stamdeard
    I can't ignor
    the vision that i have
    Flying and doging
    some thing flyes by
    is this my destiney
    or my desdants
    I shall never know

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    Why can't anyone EVER use the little spell check thingy.. tearafyed? C'mon, you're not even trying and you can't use the old oh, English isn't my first language thing 'cause a little red line appears under the word if it's spelled wrong..
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Yes, Yes I am sorry about all my bad spelling. Do forgive me. I am a bad at spelling and Some times I just don't give a stink but I should. Sorry

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    Re: My Poem

    Quote Originally Posted by FLawEdmiNd View Post
    Why can't anyone EVER use the little spell check thingy.. tearafyed? C'mon, you're not even trying and you can't use the old oh, English isn't my first language thing 'cause a little red line appears under the word if it's spelled wrong..
    Arrrrrggggg, I don't have the spell check thing because i don't have Modzilla Firefox! You gotta cool it on the spelling. I liked the poem however! It was a nice slice of life!


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    Re: My Poem

    I like the poem, though it confused me when I started reading it. I re-read it and it was good. I think it's just because I'm a little distracted.

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: My Poem

    It was a good poem,but it was too short and it didn't tell the whole story. I hope your next one is alot better. I'm sorry,but you wanted honesty so here it is.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Thank you all for all of your coments about my poem and all of my mistakes.

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