Why can't anyone EVER use the little spell check thingy.. tearafyed? C'mon, you're not even trying and you can't use the old oh, English isn't my first language thing 'cause a little red line appears under the word if it's spelled wrong..
Ok this is a poem I wrote after medatating. Tell me what all of you think and be honest.![]()
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Thought I'm tearafyed I'm moving on
Never to know what is to become of me
Thoughts are stamdeard
I can't ignor
the vision that i have
Flying and doging
some thing flyes by
is this my destiney
or my desdants
I shall never know![]()
Why can't anyone EVER use the little spell check thingy.. tearafyed? C'mon, you're not even trying and you can't use the old oh, English isn't my first language thing 'cause a little red line appears under the word if it's spelled wrong..
the love you withhold is the pain you carry.
Yes, Yes I am sorry about all my bad spelling. Do forgive me. I am a bad at spelling and Some times I just don't give a stink but I should. Sorry![]()
I like the poem, though it confused me when I started reading it. I re-read it and it was good. I think it's just because I'm a little distracted.
Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.
It was a good poem,but it was too short and it didn't tell the whole story. I hope your next one is alot better. I'm sorry,but you wanted honesty so here it is.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
Thank you all for all of your coments about my poem and all of my mistakes.![]()
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