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    My poem called:Meaning Of Life

    Black snow covering the sky,

    Falling into our very souls,

    Whispering ''come''

    Bursts of red,

    Joining together,

    Silver skies,

    Beating against the wind,

    Wanting,

    Screaming,

    For a place in the grave,

    They shout lay,


    This came to a long time ago. Maybe about a year ago? Or less,I'm not sure. Sometimes I get these ideas and I have to write them down or I will forget it. Can you understand what this means? Try and guess

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    Re: My poem called:Meaning Of Life

    I guess it's about a person feeling numb and paralysed and feels like death is calling out to her-him to leave this wrong world and join him in the grave .well that's my guess =P

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    Re: My poem called:Meaning Of Life

    amazing! so nice this poem lines are awesome and i like it.

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    Re: Meaning Of Life

    This came to a long time ago. Maybe about a year ago? Or less,I'm not sure. Sometimes I get these ideas and I have to write them down or I will forget it. Can you understand what this means? Try and guess [/QUOTE]

    I believe the individuals soul is in a great amount of pain, you can not excape the pain instead all you can do is wait and let the darkness to come and alow death to take you away.
    also in another context it could mean that the individual came and brought distruction, death, and pain with them driving all away. an emptyness envelopes them and a burning hatrid consumes.
    it is a very good and vivid poem you should write some more.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: My poem called:Meaning Of Life

    thank you very much. Glad you came to comment on my stuff lol

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    Re: Meaning Of Life

    Well I can see you put time into commenting. It's like not exactly a human but some type of possessed being. The world was cruel and the thing become not a male or female but just a being. There was no place any more so death came. The darkness was brought in. So basically you were right. I didn't at first know exactly what I was writing, but after I while I saw what I was writing. I don't know why I do that sometimes, I guess my brain just overrides and can't think or something. I am a very cluttered person. Thank so much and I am glad you enjoyed it. I will definitely put more stuff up.

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    Re: My poem called:Meaning Of Life

    cheers to all you guys. It means a lot to get these comments!

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