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Reply With QuoteWow this was good big bro,well of course it was you wrote it lolBut I could tell what you were goin for and I think you did a very great job at it.
To death it is what we live for
in arm's ,we shall over take the dawn
with truth waving our banner's for the justice
of our call,never mind you it's all for death.
To death it's our reason for the day,
it kill's ,like a child who play's those
game's of old ,nothing you can do or
say will stop judgment day ,nothing!!
Death why do you have to be so
cold ,truth it's what we all must face
the harshness, it makes you feel
alive as the day is lived and the night is called.
Someday you will understand our way's
till then you will crumble like the rest,it's
fruitless why even bother to pick up those
dream's of yesterday because there just memories of old.
A new day will wipe away the old and you're need for
those memories will be gone,how i feel dosn't matter
anymore because i found a cause that fits the bill
and you will change because our way is better.
this poem is about changes that some try to force
on other's refusing to see anyone's point of view
and lving in there own world. i dont know if i got that point across
with this poem but thats what i was going for in a dark kind of way.
any comments or sugetions would be helpfull.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Wow this was good big bro,well of course it was you wrote it lol
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
thanks im glad you think so i am still imporving on my punctuation and spelling
but this one was a bit better than that last poem i did
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Reminds me of something Hitler (or any dictator) would say.
Your spelling is getting better.Keep it up!
NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
Move Along.
coolness!! i love reading your stuff! you really have something there! i like it a lot!
"... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."
thats great!! thank you!!
I like this and don't worry about the spelling it takes time, but you can do it bro! Just keep writing the heavy hitters!
BlueFox1
i am glad you liked it and i will keep at it i am glad you liked it
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
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