Thread: My reason for life

very nice... I can't say that I relate... So I had to envision two strangers in love. Although at first, it felt like you were talking to me. (which is strange, because im not a lesbian lol.)
Still I thought it was very erotic, but tasteful. Good job!

It was pretty good but some parts where like {okay} but keep writiing.

Well I must say equinn that the poem flows nicely, and as peach says it is erotic yet tastful. I envy the twist that you put on this poem, simply because when the poem starts out you put you reader in the position of you significant other, and then it switches back to you telling how things should happen or are they willing to take a risk and see what the future may hold. Simple yet amazing in my opinion just because of the perspectives. You are well on you way equinn!

Nice... I really like the way you write poems, I have never see nsuch structure anywhere else- 1 line poems. And they are great! I really like them a lot ^^ And this one is also very nice, quite perfect... I could also really see mself in it... Because I also feel like making all dreams of my bf come true...

aww really pretty, and lots of emotions. Its heart felt, and good keep it up.

I favor these lines

Take my hand, hold me close


Tell me your dreams and your fantasies...


Is there any I can help make real for you?