In My Room

Jus' thought I'd try somethin' a little different this time around. Hope u like.

In my room
I am happy
In my room
Laffy taffy

Getting sticky
On my bed
If mom finds out
I'll be dead

My little sister
I'll ignore
As she's pounding
On my door

"I'll tell mom
when she gets home.
Don't let me in
then you'll know!"

And I laugh
As she shouts,
"You'll be in trouble
when mom finds out!"

i thought it was funny, but good at the same time and its has a little emotion to it

I was tryin' for somethin' a little on the silly side, I'm glad u like.:cool3:

haha thats a good one XD i found it quite funny its cool

Yeah, I was goin' for a funnier theme. Whenever I watch my niece and nephews, I'm often reminded of my childhood and jus' how funny it sometimes gets.

That very entertaining Joe, i liked the last line you used it was freaking funny. I look forward to see more poems of you man.

Kool, thnx. I'm glad that u liked it. B sure that I'll b workin' on more.:cool3:

Very different indeed. Silly. Good words of description...hmm.. good job^^. I want to see more from you.