i thought it was funny, but good at the same time and its has a little emotion to it
Jus' thought I'd try somethin' a little different this time around. Hope u like.
In my room
I am happy
In my room
Laffy taffy
Getting sticky
On my bed
If mom finds out
I'll be dead
My little sister
I'll ignore
As she's pounding
On my door
"I'll tell mom
when she gets home.
Don't let me in
then you'll know!"
And I laugh
As she shouts,
"You'll be in trouble
when mom finds out!"
Last edited by Joe Mage; Mar 13, 2008 at 12:06 PM.
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i thought it was funny, but good at the same time and its has a little emotion to it
Joe Mage (Mar 13, 2008)
I was tryin' for somethin' a little on the silly side, I'm glad u like.![]()
Sanity doesn't exist, it's just an excuse cooked up by crazy people to justify their actions. My myspace page: www.myspace.com/joemage
haha thats a good one XD i found it quite funny its cool
Joe Mage (Mar 13, 2008)
Yeah, I was goin' for a funnier theme. Whenever I watch my niece and nephews, I'm often reminded of my childhood and jus' how funny it sometimes gets.
Sanity doesn't exist, it's just an excuse cooked up by crazy people to justify their actions. My myspace page: www.myspace.com/joemage
That very entertaining Joe, i liked the last line you used it was freaking funny. I look forward to see more poems of you man.
Joe Mage (Mar 13, 2008)
Kool, thnx. I'm glad that u liked it. B sure that I'll b workin' on more.![]()
Sanity doesn't exist, it's just an excuse cooked up by crazy people to justify their actions. My myspace page: www.myspace.com/joemage
Very different indeed. Silly. Good words of description...hmm.. good job^^. I want to see more from you.
Yeah, Bye.
Joe Mage (Mar 17, 2008)
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