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For3v3r_Lost · Sep 07, 2006, 02:22 PM

My life is full of sorrow and pain
Me, myself and I have gone insane
You came along and showed me how
My life is changing since you're around
Death, pain, illusion
You got me out of this confusion
I've always been thinking of you
If you ask me if I love you, I do
I'm so sick of lies
Sick of disagreements and fights
Am I alone?

Can you take it all away?
This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
I am living in a lie
Here I am, silently beginning to cry
Hold me tight and close
This is the path I wish I didn't chose
But at least I've finally found...you

My heart slowly begins to heal
What's this feeling you're making me feel?
I begin to get up slowly
Are you lonely?
Death, pain, illusion
You got me out of this confusion
I hope we'll last forever
I hope we'll be together
I feel cold, I feel weak
There are things I couldn't see

Can you take it all away?
This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
I am living in a lie
Here I am, silently beginning to cry
Hold me tight and close
This is the path I wish I never chose
But at least I've finally found...you

I have to be strong
Don't leave me, leave me behind
No, no please
Stay with me
Am I alone?

Can you take it all away?
This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
I am living in a lie
Here I am, silently beginning to cry
Hold me tight and close
This is the path I wish I never chose
But at least I've finally found...you

*Baal* · Sep 07, 2006, 04:53 PM

hmph
my God this is beutifull bloody...

sephrasu · Sep 07, 2006, 05:05 PM

I don`t have words to decribe the feeling it gives me

For3v3r_Lost · Sep 07, 2006, 05:18 PM

ah-ha so you're speechless? it's okay at least you commented about it. Is it a good thing or a bad thing though? and Baal, thank youuu! lol

Fallen Hero · Sep 07, 2006, 05:23 PM

I thought it was good. Could tell you actually put a lot of effort into the poem. Keep it up.

kedar · Sep 07, 2006, 08:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Baal

hmph
my God this is beutifull bloody...

Please read the Fanfics and Poems Forum Rules: AO RULES

Let this be a final warning, I don't want to see anymore of these short posts!!

BlueFox1 · Sep 09, 2006, 01:21 AM

Beautifully written! How does one describe the feeling it give? Awesome!

"Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will they be true or stay forever blue? That's were this BlueFox will stand."

BlueFox1

For3v3r_Lost · Sep 09, 2006, 08:52 AM

Thanks! I wrote it two days ago. I will continue to write more! of course writing poems/songs is my favorite thing to do. =) and yeah the song I written here comes from my heart and put it in words. It descibes how I really feel.

Sep 07, 2006, 02:22 PM	#1 (permalink)
For3v3r_Lost Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world Posts: 249 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 310	My Search My life is full of sorrow and pain Me, myself and I have gone insane You came along and showed me how My life is changing since you're around Death, pain, illusion You got me out of this confusion I've always been thinking of you If you ask me if I love you, I do I'm so sick of lies Sick of disagreements and fights Am I alone? Can you take it all away? This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid I am living in a lie Here I am, silently beginning to cry Hold me tight and close This is the path I wish I didn't chose But at least I've finally found...you My heart slowly begins to heal What's this feeling you're making me feel? I begin to get up slowly Are you lonely? Death, pain, illusion You got me out of this confusion I hope we'll last forever I hope we'll be together I feel cold, I feel weak There are things I couldn't see Can you take it all away? This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid I am living in a lie Here I am, silently beginning to cry Hold me tight and close This is the path I wish I never chose But at least I've finally found...you I have to be strong Don't leave me, leave me behind No, no please Stay with me Am I alone? Can you take it all away? This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid I am living in a lie Here I am, silently beginning to cry Hold me tight and close This is the path I wish I never chose But at least I've finally found...you __________________ .:\|Myspace Profile\|.:.\|My Forum\|.:.\|My AO Gallery\|.:.\|My December\|:. "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
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Sep 07, 2006, 04:53 PM	#2 (permalink)
Baal S.E.L - sexy etna lover Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez Posts: 1,066 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 309	Re: My Search hmph my God this is beutifull bloody... __________________ perdoname michelle!
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sephrasu Newbie Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In the middle of nowhere Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 154	Re: My Search I don`t have words to decribe the feeling it gives me
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Sep 07, 2006, 05:18 PM	#4 (permalink)
For3v3r_Lost Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world Posts: 249 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 310	Re: My Search ah-ha so you're speechless? it's okay at least you commented about it. Is it a good thing or a bad thing though? and Baal, thank youuu! lol __________________ .:\|Myspace Profile\|.:.\|My Forum\|.:.\|My AO Gallery\|.:.\|My December\|:. "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
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Fallen Hero Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 453 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 334	Re: My Search I thought it was good. Could tell you actually put a lot of effort into the poem. Keep it up. __________________
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Sep 09, 2006, 01:21 AM	#7 (permalink)
BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,156	Re: My Search Beautifully written! How does one describe the feeling it give? Awesome! "Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will they be true or stay forever blue? That's were this BlueFox will stand." BlueFox1
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Sep 09, 2006, 08:52 AM	#8 (permalink)
For3v3r_Lost Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world Posts: 249 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 310	Re: My Search Thanks! I wrote it two days ago. I will continue to write more! of course writing poems/songs is my favorite thing to do. =) and yeah the song I written here comes from my heart and put it in words. It descibes how I really feel. __________________ .:\|Myspace Profile\|.:.\|My Forum\|.:.\|My AO Gallery\|.:.\|My December\|:. "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
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