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Old Sep 07, 2006, 02:22 PM   #1 (permalink)
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My life is full of sorrow and pain
Me, myself and I have gone insane
You came along and showed me how
My life is changing since you're around
Death, pain, illusion
You got me out of this confusion
I've always been thinking of you
If you ask me if I love you, I do
I'm so sick of lies
Sick of disagreements and fights
Am I alone?

Can you take it all away?
This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
I am living in a lie
Here I am, silently beginning to cry
Hold me tight and close
This is the path I wish I didn't chose
But at least I've finally found...you

My heart slowly begins to heal
What's this feeling you're making me feel?
I begin to get up slowly
Are you lonely?
Death, pain, illusion
You got me out of this confusion
I hope we'll last forever
I hope we'll be together
I feel cold, I feel weak
There are things I couldn't see

Can you take it all away?
This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
I am living in a lie
Here I am, silently beginning to cry
Hold me tight and close
This is the path I wish I never chose
But at least I've finally found...you

I have to be strong
Don't leave me, leave me behind
No, no please
Stay with me
Am I alone?

Can you take it all away?
This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
I am living in a lie
Here I am, silently beginning to cry
Hold me tight and close
This is the path I wish I never chose
But at least I've finally found...you
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Old Sep 07, 2006, 04:53 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: My Search

hmph
my God this is beutifull bloody...
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Old Sep 07, 2006, 05:05 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I don`t have words to decribe the feeling it gives me
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Old Sep 07, 2006, 05:18 PM   #4 (permalink)
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ah-ha so you're speechless? it's okay at least you commented about it. Is it a good thing or a bad thing though? and Baal, thank youuu! lol
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Old Sep 07, 2006, 05:23 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I thought it was good. Could tell you actually put a lot of effort into the poem. Keep it up.
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Old Sep 07, 2006, 08:03 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: My Search

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hmph
my God this is beutifull bloody...
Please read the Fanfics and Poems Forum Rules: AO RULES

Let this be a final warning, I don't want to see anymore of these short posts!!
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Old Sep 09, 2006, 01:21 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Beautifully written! How does one describe the feeling it give? Awesome!

"Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will they be true or stay forever blue? That's were this BlueFox will stand."

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Old Sep 09, 2006, 08:52 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks! I wrote it two days ago. I will continue to write more! of course writing poems/songs is my favorite thing to do. =) and yeah the song I written here comes from my heart and put it in words. It descibes how I really feel.
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