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    My life is full of sorrow and pain
    Me, myself and I have gone insane
    You came along and showed me how
    My life is changing since you're around
    Death, pain, illusion
    You got me out of this confusion
    I've always been thinking of you
    If you ask me if I love you, I do
    I'm so sick of lies
    Sick of disagreements and fights
    Am I alone?

    Can you take it all away?
    This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
    I am living in a lie
    Here I am, silently beginning to cry
    Hold me tight and close
    This is the path I wish I didn't chose
    But at least I've finally found...you

    My heart slowly begins to heal
    What's this feeling you're making me feel?
    I begin to get up slowly
    Are you lonely?
    Death, pain, illusion
    You got me out of this confusion
    I hope we'll last forever
    I hope we'll be together
    I feel cold, I feel weak
    There are things I couldn't see

    Can you take it all away?
    This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
    I am living in a lie
    Here I am, silently beginning to cry
    Hold me tight and close
    This is the path I wish I never chose
    But at least I've finally found...you

    I have to be strong
    Don't leave me, leave me behind
    No, no please
    Stay with me
    Am I alone?

    Can you take it all away?
    This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
    I am living in a lie
    Here I am, silently beginning to cry
    Hold me tight and close
    This is the path I wish I never chose
    But at least I've finally found...you
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: My Search

    hmph
    my God this is beutifull bloody...



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: My Search

    I don`t have words to decribe the feeling it gives me

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    ah-ha so you're speechless? it's okay at least you commented about it. Is it a good thing or a bad thing though? and Baal, thank youuu! lol
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    I thought it was good. Could tell you actually put a lot of effort into the poem. Keep it up.

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    Re: My Search

    Quote Originally Posted by Baal
    hmph
    my God this is beutifull bloody...
    Please read the Fanfics and Poems Forum Rules: AO RULES

    Let this be a final warning, I don't want to see anymore of these short posts!!

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    Re: My Search

    Beautifully written! How does one describe the feeling it give? Awesome!

    "Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will they be true or stay forever blue? That's were this BlueFox will stand."

    BlueFox1

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    Re: My Search

    Thanks! I wrote it two days ago. I will continue to write more! of course writing poems/songs is my favorite thing to do. =) and yeah the song I written here comes from my heart and put it in words. It descibes how I really feel.
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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