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my God this is beutifull bloody...
My life is full of sorrow and pain
Me, myself and I have gone insane
You came along and showed me how
My life is changing since you're around
Death, pain, illusion
You got me out of this confusion
I've always been thinking of you
If you ask me if I love you, I do
I'm so sick of lies
Sick of disagreements and fights
Am I alone?
Can you take it all away?
This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
I am living in a lie
Here I am, silently beginning to cry
Hold me tight and close
This is the path I wish I didn't chose
But at least I've finally found...you
My heart slowly begins to heal
What's this feeling you're making me feel?
I begin to get up slowly
Are you lonely?
Death, pain, illusion
You got me out of this confusion
I hope we'll last forever
I hope we'll be together
I feel cold, I feel weak
There are things I couldn't see
Can you take it all away?
This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
I am living in a lie
Here I am, silently beginning to cry
Hold me tight and close
This is the path I wish I never chose
But at least I've finally found...you
I have to be strong
Don't leave me, leave me behind
No, no please
Stay with me
Am I alone?
Can you take it all away?
This pain, this illusion, I'm afraid
I am living in a lie
Here I am, silently beginning to cry
Hold me tight and close
This is the path I wish I never chose
But at least I've finally found...you
"I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
hmph
my God this is beutifull bloody...
perdoname michelle!
I don`t have words to decribe the feeling it gives me
ah-ha so you're speechless? it's okay at least you commented about it. Is it a good thing or a bad thing though? and Baal, thank youuu! lol
"I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
I thought it was good. Could tell you actually put a lot of effort into the poem. Keep it up.
Please read the Fanfics and Poems Forum Rules: AO RULESOriginally Posted by Baal
Let this be a final warning, I don't want to see anymore of these short posts!!
Beautifully written! How does one describe the feeling it give? Awesome!
"Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will they be true or stay forever blue? That's were this BlueFox will stand."
BlueFox1
Thanks! I wrote it two days ago. I will continue to write more! of course writing poems/songs is my favorite thing to do. =) and yeah the song I written here comes from my heart and put it in words. It descibes how I really feel.
"I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
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