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    My secret

    Please don’t cry those tears
    Those tears of sadness and regret
    Those tears that haunt my mind and taunt me so

    Please don’t look at me with those eyes
    Those eyes that shine for me
    Those eyes that kiss me goodnight

    Please don’t smile at me with those lips
    Those lips that elude me
    Those lips that can never be mine

    Please don’t touch me with those hands
    Those hands that rush away my tears
    Those hands that fix me when I’m broken

    Please don’t talk those words
    Those words that make me laugh
    Those words that soothe me

    Please don’t think those thoughts
    Those thoughts I think too
    Those thoughts that confuse us

    Please don’t say those words
    Those words that bear your soul
    Those words that make me bear mine

    Please don’t do this
    This that will hurt you
    This that will give away my secret

    Please don’t take away my heart
    My heart that hides away her secret
    My heart that loves you.

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    This pretty long as far as my poems go... anyway, I was reading the poem 'mother,' previously posted and inspiration struck... although this strays a tad from what I had envisioned it still pleases me, and look here! It's not depressive and filled with angst.. go Chelsea.. harzam!

    As always,
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: My secret

    Hmmm. I'm not fond of your use of repetition.
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